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  • MCRmypansy

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    I just re-read this yesterday cause I was fucking bored and omg, I love it so much :D
    I know in one chapter you said you didn't really wanna write this story anymore but I was wondering, if the last chapter was the end? Cause not knowing if it is or not is gonna kill me D:
    July 14th, 2011 at 10:13pm
  • xEyexHeartxIerox

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    please update frankie and gee need to get back together
    October 7th, 2009 at 06:23am
  • Frerardlover

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    Hello, there! I heard about this fic in the mcrficfinder community on LiveJournal and here I am. I'm not entirely sure how to navigate on this website, but here we go! I read all of the chapters you have posted so far, and let me tell you, WOW!!! I hope you get motivated to write more. I'm in a writing slump myself. *sigh* I love Frank's character personality so damn much! The pet names thing really had me laughing. GER! xD I never really thought about that, couple-y things, I mean. Hmm. Anywho, I am really pleased and would love it if you could post some more before I die. That would be fantastic. Thank you! I'm frerardislove on LiveJournal, just in case you feel the need to seek me out.
    June 11th, 2009 at 01:26am
  • black_like_my_coffee

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    please please please update this
    May 21st, 2009 at 11:16pm
  • Sniffing Sharpies.

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    I'm in love with all of these characters.
    Even the minor ones, like Adam...
    And even though Gerard makes me so mad in some parts.
    BLARGH!
    You've written this beautifully, and I'm jealous.
    I wish I could write like that...
    Anyway, lovely job.
    I'm not sure if this story is over...or what, but anyway.
    Great job!
    ^_^
    May 4th, 2009 at 03:59am
  • birdcaged

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    I miss this so fucking much
    October 24th, 2008 at 08:31am
  • OMGmonsters?!--x

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    This story is great <3
    I subscribed :)
    Update soon?
    September 8th, 2008 at 12:07am
  • easterbunny

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    =DDD
    September 7th, 2008 at 12:24pm
  • Rain On My Parade.

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    wow!
    amazing simply amazing.
    i can not think of anything else to say.
    (:
    September 7th, 2008 at 09:47am
  • tom conrad

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    merance:
    Like many of my fellow readers, I'm just a tad confused. ;)

    How long had their little plot been going on for? Since Bert caught him and Frank?
    But then you said something about when he and Frank first got together and no-one was shocked or whatever...
    PM me or something, please?

    I LOVE THIS STORY. :D
    the plot where frank knew and whatnot? since chapter 8.

    and your second questions:
    Gerard was freaking out about what he'd done at the party, which is outside his normal self [aka. he normally never cares about other people) so Bert is doing this whole, 'wtf. wtf. why are you even thinking of going back? like wtf gerard, you're an asshole. you don't ever apologize for shit you do. wtfff he's a nerd. what's so special about him to get all freaked out for? wtff.

    when I said no one was shocked, I litereally meant all their peers, including Bert. But Bert was just shocked to find out Gerard *cared*, more than finding out about Frank and Gerard being in a relationship.

    ALRIGHTY THEN. that made no sense.
    September 7th, 2008 at 02:36am
  • merance

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    Like many of my fellow readers, I'm just a tad confused. ;)

    How long had their little plot been going on for? Since Bert caught him and Frank?
    But then you said something about when he and Frank first got together and no-one was shocked or whatever...
    PM me or something, please?

    I LOVE THIS STORY. :D
    September 6th, 2008 at 03:10pm
  • Dorian Gray

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    That's the best chapter so far, I think :)

    It's awesome, I really want to see Frank's reaction when Gerard comes to apologize :D:D And I'm so proud of Gerard! I mean, he's actually not listening to Mikey, and he's gonna apologize to Frank :D:D:D:D

    more soon? :arms:
    September 6th, 2008 at 11:28am
  • pierrot the clown.

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    I love to confuse people, too! But you, apparently, can do that way better than I do. :]

    I think I've more or less gotten the plot... but I have to go back and reread all of the story 'cause right now I kinda forgot who some characters were and shit, and what had happened so far. And... there's just one more chapter, right?

    Damn! I have like this really important test tomorrow and all I'll be able to think about is this story... but I'm sure it'll be worth it. I'll so definitely comment again when I comprehend it all and this story's ended.

    xx
    September 6th, 2008 at 05:06am
  • tom conrad

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    I like to confuse people :tehe:

    :]
    September 6th, 2008 at 03:15am
  • God Save The Queen

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    This is intense. And confusing as hell. But completely radd.
    I love stories with one-of-a-kind plots; because you never know what's to happen next and the suspense is half the fun.

    So congrats on writing one of the most unique and interesting stories I've ever read :]
    September 6th, 2008 at 03:00am
  • Spanish Lullaby

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    OK 1. That was the coolest author comment EVA! 2. PLEASE tell me Gee and Frank do in fact end up together. And what the hell's up with the blood.

    This story's almost over. DAMN!!!!!
    September 6th, 2008 at 02:57am
  • tom conrad

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    IMPORTANT AUTHOR'S NOTE, but not ~really

    So sorry for the confusssssion :l

    Actually, no, that was my ploy to get people to reply more. I figured the lurkers would do this: Smiley then go :omfg: (WTF), and soon do this Hail about how brilliant I am and comment. But only, like, five people got it, so I FAILED ::Ranting: and it did this to my ego: omgno:

    No really, I wanted the confusion, just like Gerard soon will. But instead of telling you, I want to show you. Okay, that was lame. But hey, my brain works in very weird, mysterious ways that I still don't understand. I never will. We're not the best of friends most days, but we deal.

    I C G P: :arms: Thank you so much

    So hey; next chapter sooon, like tomorrow soon. Hopefully clear up the confusion, I'm just feeding it to you guys one at a time. I've found my inspiration for this story again! I mean it, I really did. I was listening to Pretty.Odd and watching LOTMS all night, and my nutJob bee eff eff Eileen was spamming me with pics of beautiful, beautiful boys kissing , and we RPed a session where Frank was this redneck hit man and he was sent to go kill Farmer Way and they do it in one of the haystacks and it got me really...HAPPYY :cheese: and I started to sing and smile and drool and hyperventilate a bit and laugh and BAM, bada bing: I knocked out this chapter in 20 minutes.Thanks so much for putting up with me. August has been very unkind to me. Hopefully September will be sweeter. ily guys. :arms:
    September 5th, 2008 at 06:47am
  • Alice Verney

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    damn mikeys mean
    August 10th, 2008 at 04:35am
  • I C G P

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    As much as I hate it, I respect you for not continuing this story with a sequel. Some things are better left alone, and I have a funny feeling this is one of them. I love this so much though, that I don't want to see it end. I'm really intrigued as to what's going to happen next, because obviously like everyone else I didn't understand that last chapter.

    Still, I'm sure you'll end it on something amazing. I love the way you write. It's really good. This is definitely one of my favourite stories, even though it's only 12 chapters long. You deserve the ten stars.
    In Love
    I love your Frank.
    He's too nerdy and cute for his own good.

    Roll on the final chapter!
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    xo
    August 9th, 2008 at 12:28am
  • burning_bones

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    Wow! This Story Has Such A Original storyline! The Best Ferard I've Read In Awhile For Sure! ^____^

    Can You Read My Original Fiction? Pwease? It Needs Some Love ^____^

    It's Called "Blame It On The Black Out"...Give It A Chance...=]
    August 8th, 2008 at 02:00am
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