Hi! I'd just like to say I love this story, you are an amazing writer, and I stayed up until two o' clock in the morning to finish reading all of this. I was getting stressed out for Jess!
I've also discovered a ton of amazing bands that I wouldn't have otherwise. Thanks. XD
holy fucking shit.. damn.. this is such a surreal and crazy situation.. damn. I'm actually kind of hoping that Stephen wakes up and tells John to shut up. It doesn't have to mean his up for good, just long enough to make John shut up . like if he said, 'John, shut up! I can't sleep with you yelling like a fucking maniac' and then just fall asleep again.. just an idea anyways... other than that, I'm hoping for more soon =)
sorry, for not commenting in so long /: i feel bad, like really freaking bad!
So here are my comments so far from where i left off.
-Holy shit! That was Stephen in the car! No!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -John shouldn't blame Jess for the accident, again it was an accident. I'm glad Kenny is okay and same with Jess but I was nearly in tears when I heard Stephen was in a coma D; -Jawn, came back and apologized! What's going to happen between him and Jess (just friends?) and what happened to Kenny (what's he thinking about the whole thing? Wasn't it just suppose to be just him and her? How is he feeling during all of this? He was friends with Stephen too!? -No! Stephen can't die! I want him alive! I miss him D; -NONE OF THEM KNEW ABOUT HIS HEART PROBLEM?!!?? -John needs to seriously stop blaming Jess, and he needs to stop doing it in his brothers hospital room. What if he woke up right when he was blaming her for all of it? Then he'd be upset with how his brother is treating her, and everyone else....?
Well, there's my feedback (: Sorry, about not commenting /: Keep up the good work, i love the story so much<3 I seriously don't want it to end. Like never ever ever. But again. All good things must come to an end ):
after 121 chapters you can promote what ever the fuck you want! x) anyways, I'm hoping that there might be some mending being done now that pretty much everyone is in the same room together.. IDK, just a thought anyways. I don't know what to expect from you.. especially since I thought she was going to do something incredibly stupid after the line 'fuck it' and then she is just bawling her eyes out.. maybe the 'just' shouldn't be there.. fuck it.. this comment is already getting way too long..
More soon please! =D
p.s. checking your other story out in a bit, promoting works ;)
...DAMN IT... I was hoping it wasn't him.. even though I kind of knew.. and that last line.. fuck it.. that can't be good.. I hope this won't push her of that edge she has been on so many times... I'm thinking suicide.. or maybe she just chooses to disappear without a trace to follow.. IDK.. this is just what went through my mind (in a simplyfied version.. xD )