What Makes It Wrong for Us to Fall in Love? - Comments

lawlz, i love your comment :3
ANYWHOO, i loved this chapter. very emotional and sad. i can't believe Stephen isn't believing her about how much she loves him. He proposed, she didn't say yes or no, and he just assumed that she was lying. Very sad, and then at the end when she wanted to kill herself. I want to know what's going to happen next, if she killed my Kennedy i'm going to cry D;

whoops i mean by

ohgod what if jawn gets hit my the knife ohgod i hope not

guys, jess is gonna push stephen out the window after she says no then she's gonna get back with kennedy, they're gonna get married and jawn's the best man. then garrett saves the world during the zombie apocalypse where stephen's a part because he died when he fell out his window and turned into a zombie, but garrett doesn't slay him. instead, he kills jess and she turns into a zombie and joins stephen. that's how it ends, don't wait for the next chapter, you guys. ;)

Just subscribed and read all of it ;) love it!

Why isn't Stephen happy she loves him?!? But that was an interesting proposal haha. I'm super excited from the next update :D

well at least they are talking to each other.. but I'm wondering why Stephen keeps insisting on her lying to him.. how he keeps thinking that he was the only one in pain.. (well I'm not sure about the last one..)

also I saw the bit with the title, nicely done =)

still awesome and I can't wait for more

ohmygod aksdfgadsjfga
u r perf and this story is perf

Oh wait I meant NO JESS I DON'T WANT YOU TO BE WITH ME sorry lol

And page claim c:

What makes it wrong for us to fall in love I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE

And eating chips in the dumpster wodlamrngjdd

But omg I REALLY liked that chapter. Like, I like how they were so brutally honest with each other, yet there was (surprisingly) no violence and how Stephen wanted to kill Jawn for locking them in together

I swear Stephen is bipolar or s/t srsly?? He's like NO JESS I DON'T WANT YOU BE WITH JAWN OR KENNY GET AWAY FROM ME then he's like MARRY ME

K Stephen k

Girl, have you not been getting my comments?!
I love this story so fucking much that I'm going to cry because it's ending /:
best story ever!! I really want to know what she's going to say!!! Ahhh!! So exciting :3
did I mention that I REALLLY REALLLY LOVE THIS STORY??!!!

OH MY GOD, IS GRACE ME?!!!!!!!DDSAADSHGFADSLGASLF
AND NOOOO STEPHEN AND JESS ARE GOING TO RUIN THEIR LIVES WITH MARRIAGE :'C BUT IT'S OKAY CAUSE THEY'LL BE ADORABLE
SO MUCH DRAMA AND PAT WAS JUST ADORABLEA EKSGASKGVHAKJSVGNSMGFVNSMS
qurl dis iz gr8

I wonder if this locking them in a room thing will help anything and isn't there at least one window? so they could get out anyways. all in all, I'm not sure what to think about Jawn's plan. it could help, it could make it worse or maybe it doesn't do anything at all... IDK, I'm just going to stop rambling and wait patiently for more of your story. =)

What will happen :O
Heeey! I said hey! I said jack's dick is small (9/22/11)

*deep sigh* I don't think it was fair for Jess to get mad at Jawn like that. All he ever does is try to make her feel better and everything he does is for her and the least she could do is understand why he didn't tell her that he and Kennedy were fighting. And ugh, Stephen. Reunited and it feels like crap. It was so cute when Pat stopped Kennedy from leaving and Garrett helped c:

And idk why this No, he didn't rape me. was so funny but it was lol

Wow, things are a bit chaotic haha. I really like this chapter. I hope Stephen isn't going to be a big meanie face and finally talk to Jess

STEPHENNNNNNN!!!!! WHY DID YOU RUN AWAY!!! And Jawn why did you have to say that?!?

OMG 100 POINTS FOR YOU! When I read that last part about the speech it made me smile because Garrett's just an A+ person ok I wish I could make a speech about him it'd probably be like an hour long lol and YOU'RE STARTING A GARRETT STORY?!?! YESTESYESYEYSYWYSES

is it obvious that he's my favorite person in the world idk

Anyway, "Yeah, sort of." Garrett sarcastically answered as he picked it up. He looked at Pat. "Did you get hurt, baby?"

"No." Pat answered. He was scared. Jawn probably aimed for him when he threw the scissors. AWWWWWRFOWPWKFKCKS so cute. So cute. I love how they call each other baby like omg it just makes me so happy.

And the last comment John made about Kenny oh my GOD, Mr. Sassypants! And Stephen needs to stop being a goddamn pussy, jeez.

lol, i can't wait for Jawn and Kenny's last minute drama. I know he said it because he was annoyed, but it was still bad. especially when everyone was around. and why did Stephen run off D:
Lawlz, Stephen is playing cinderella xD I LIKE THAT!

good luck! =D

now with that out of the way... what is going on with stephen? well, most of them.. (like I ever knew xD) I can't wait to hear more, because I have given up on guessing when it comes to this story..

still awesome =)