What Makes It Wrong for Us to Fall in Love? - Comments

O.o OMFG! WTF?!?.. okay I'm calm again.. so parents? bandmates? family? nick and those guys? some other band? close friends? police? peremedics? some old friend from way long ago? ... erhm.. yeah, I think that's it for now.. for the ideas I mean.. I'm honorstly not sure which one of these options I believe the most.. It could be basicly ANYONE.. 'cause all of them, could have an explanation for being in cali...

More soon please! =)

I think it's either Stephen or Jawns car but I don't know what either of them would be doing in Cali... Hmmmm....

repl or not, quick updates or not - as long as your keeping the story, planning to update in the near future (´'cause nobody knows when in the near future is..) I'm good =) Your seriously lucky that there coming.. I don't think I get to be that lucky anytime soon. There is not excaty a big fan base here :( anyways, Still awesome and I can' wait to read more of this drama =)

So she loves Kennedy again? What about Stephen? I'm kinda confused now... But still I love this story :)

Did I ever tell you how much this story makes me smile? Well it does :3
any way, I love how she dreamt of their first kiss. And did she get to send the text to Jared?

when have you ever given a bad chaper?? and if so when? 'cause I would like to know your difinition of bad is then.. anyways, so they are running away to catch a break from everything. well, it was well needed and I did consider her running off as you are well aware of. but I haven't considert what Kennedy's presense will do to the whole thing.. if she will run of on her own, if they will return together or apart and a whole lot of other mumbo jumbo I can't figure out in my head right now. Is this enough feed back for you, I can write more rambling down if you like ;p

anyways, here's a long comment and a simple request of (can you guess it) more of your story soon! =)

I'm in serious need of getting my creative comment skill back.. 'cause I'm blank right now.. so.. maybe next time I'll get a comment out of the thing formerly known as my brain..

more soon please =)

oh mah gahd jess is a ho and jawn and oh nooooooooooooo :c

It was sad but also cute (: I loved it<333

Omg WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY COULDN'T HAVE JESS NOT BEEN SUCH A BITCH IF SHE WASN'T THEN ALL SHE WOULD'VE HAD DONE WAS SIT THERE AND LOOK PRETTY KNDGAKNGASDKVANSO WHY OH MY GAWD AND AGAIN JOSH WAS MENTIONED SO IT'S ALL PERFECT MY ALL CAPS RAGE IS COMING BACK

That was a pretty interesting couple of chapters. It sounds like things got really chaotic after the party. Everyone seems really lost and hurt. I dont know how Jess is gonna fix this.

I'm wondering if something like this will push her over the edge, if this will be the final straw.. if any of this can be fixed, if this is the time she ´runs like hell and never looks back.. changes her name and looks and starts all over from scratch.. hmmm...

more soon please =)

Jawn's sarcasticness makes him seem like a douchebag. But then again he has a point. Jess did, indeed, hurt everyone and jawn sounds like he's really sorry but for what Jess did her sorry, to me, doesn't cut it.

I really liked this chapter. I can't wait for more :3

I think my mind is actually blank... damn it.. can't think of a comment right now.. so hopefully my next one will be better! x)

that was really cute. I got confused at the part where there breathes were like the same and stuff like that but then you mentioned that they did the dirty deed. so then it clarified my mind :3 all in all it was incredibly cute, i wish i heard more memories, even though they're not real but it would've made me 'awwwweee' a lot more xD

OMG WHEN YOU SAID 'THAT'S IT' I THOUGHT YOU MEANT LIKE 'THE END' AND I WAS LIKE 'GURL THATS THE SHITTIEST ENDING EVAR OMG'
But all of that aside, I really did like this. It's all WOO~~ and then Josh was mentioned and just perfect bundle of drama.

I don't know but the chapter to me was cute-ish... The whole ice crem thing and then at the end when he apologized for the phone call and eating th ice cream , I dont know it was just adorable :3
BUTTTTTT, it was also sad and I'm just happy you didn't stab Kennedy ! I loved it. It was really good and I can't wait for the next chapter.

first reliefe - she didn't kill herself. then scared as shit - what about kennedy?!? then calm again- kennedy only got cut in the cheek.. then a big mix of sad, indifferenrence and a hell of alot more that I don't have the time to write down troughout the chapter..

I guess, I just don't know what to expect, when it comes to this story and even if I do, it's rarely correct..

anyways, still great and I hope for more soon.. 'cause that better not be the end.. x)

lol awesome comment! x'D

anyways, O.O what the flying fuck just happened?!? he's like.. and she's like.. and then kennedy.. and a knife.. ghasdfghæaskjdjfaskdl argh! I have no idea what to think here woman! put me out of my misery soon please! o.o scheisse... lort, hold da helt kæft... merde.. *takes in deep breath* okay I'm calm again, and I can so not wait for the next update...

MORE SOON PLEASE!

OH MY GAWD YOU SEXUALLY PROMISCUOUS OGAHLVJGSNKAGHVDRKXZSLGVFHKZS,LHMLZSKMHYBGLKZNBMEZANB,DZNBJLKAHT
DEAD DEAD DEAD THAT'S WHAT I AM
THAT'S WHAT KENNEDY IS TOO
OH MY GAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWD