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  • lil_angel666

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    Why is it humnity claims to be so evolved, yet we have moments like that where the males are competing for the one female??? It just seems strange considering most people believe that we are above our animalistic tendencies

    anyway update again when you can!!!
    August 27th, 2011 at 08:36am
  • ClaudiaBiedles

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    Ugh, it's late. I don't have much to say I guess.

    Uhh, Nick seems like a decent guy; just not the right guy for Annie. :P
    August 27th, 2011 at 07:09am
  • The Colour of Music

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    I loved that chpater!
    The fighting between Darren and Nick was priceless. But Annie better end up with darren at the end or I will hunt you down! :3
    Even if tEoS has no plot, it is still one of my favourite stories of all time. :P
    I hope you have a better week next week.
    Keep up the writing. I'm loving it.
    ^_^
    ♥♥♥
    August 27th, 2011 at 04:01am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    No plot...? AND I'M THIS FREAKING OBSESSED?!
    Seriously. I squealed like an adolescent at a Bieber concert when I saw the e-mail (sorry, I don't like Justin Bieber like, at all. Don't even know if I spelled his name right, and I don't care). This story is somehow rivaling my love of SuperHero and TGL, even though it's not fantasy or scifi or anything. Which is WEIRD. But I love, love, love, love, love it! So keep it up!

    I really like Darren knocking Nick off of his high horse. Nick came in and I freaked out, thinking, "Oh, no!!!" and "There will be blood!!!" and things like that. So far, the encounter went nicely.

    I really can't wait for more, but I will. Haha :)
    August 26th, 2011 at 11:53pm
  • akanevampire19

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    I love this story! Darren is perfect! =D
    I'm in my third year of collage and its gets difficult.... Too much stuff to read! =/
    August 26th, 2011 at 11:06pm
  • amulette.

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    No, don't die D:
    Darren is just so... adorable.
    Thank you for updating. This story is amazing and I just can't get enough of it.
    Please update soon (: Good luck with college!
    August 26th, 2011 at 09:40pm
  • Mu-

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    Yay! Well done on figuring out what was happening with Darren :)
    August 23rd, 2011 at 08:11am
  • Reverse-This-Curse

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    Errrm... It's been forever since you've updated, my dear ^-^ And I really really really love this story~ So could you pretty please write soon? For Darren ;]
    August 11th, 2011 at 03:40am
  • xXxWickedAngelsxXx

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    Yay! I loved that movie!! (Tangled) XD

    I love your stories! And you don't need to reply saying thank you. I tend to comment a lot on stories I ador!!!
    August 8th, 2011 at 07:06pm
  • amulette.

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    Amazing! I absolutely adore this story :D I read this in... forty-five minutes. But, you're making me fall in love with Darren... Now you have to make a life size alive version of him... for me, yeah? (:
    August 6th, 2011 at 05:12am
  • The Colour of Music

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    Finally! -parade through the house-
    Oh no ... He is some deep trouble.
    Now the next big question is how are you going to get him out of it?
    XD
    ♥♥
    August 4th, 2011 at 08:59am
  • topless

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    Hi! Remember me? I'm a stalker of SuperHero and saw this and was like "OMG WUT."
    This story is just...I can't even...there are no words.
    It's flawless and adorable and scary and action-y and cute and I love everyone in it except Flynn and Rizzo. Though, I kind of like Rizzo, his name is fun to say. Rizzzzzo.

    I love how she keeps slapping him. STAY STRONG GIRLFRIEND. Flower power!
    Well, I'm officially hooked, subscribed and yeah. Tis all. :)
    August 3rd, 2011 at 07:14pm
  • kissmyoops

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    I love when I can't get online for a couple days, and come on, and you've updated loads. I literally get super excited to read. I feel like a total nerd saying that but... It's worth it, (:
    August 2nd, 2011 at 05:40pm
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    So now I finally know what's up with Darren and yet I still completely love him. I like that Annie's softening up to him but I wish she'd hurry up and love him already before I beat her to the chase >.<
    August 2nd, 2011 at 12:14pm
  • ClaudiaBiedles

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    Finally! The big secret is out!

    Wow. I would not have been able to conjure that up, haha. It's a smart solution, though :P.

    I have an idea; why don't we all just form a mob and kill Rizzo together? Who's with me?! ... *crickets* Alright, so that's not gonna work :/.

    Why don't I just leave all the thinking to you, yeah? ;)
    August 1st, 2011 at 05:55pm
  • meilishezhe

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    wow, you're updating faster and faster! Great chapter.
    August 1st, 2011 at 05:44pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Haha, I know I've heard Rizzo somewhere, too...but I like it.
    And I think I squealed when I saw the email that said you'd updated. Just so you know. :)

    I love this story more and more each time, and I'm glad you figured out what's had Darren's knickers in a twist, because now I'm...more freaking scared for him than ever. Thaaanks (sarcastic drawl.).

    Hehe, just kidding about the sarcasm, but I really am worried for him and for Annie now. I just feel like Rizzo might track him back to her and take her as colateral or in revenge or something, and...yeah. Haha. But please update soon, because I don't know how much more suspense I can take!

    I love all of your stories, but this one might have temporarily taken priority...:)
    August 1st, 2011 at 05:08pm
  • lil_angel666

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    Isn't there also a Rizzo in Grease???

    anyway, update please!!!!!
    August 1st, 2011 at 02:43pm
  • Rose1213

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    Yay! I was so happy to see that you updated, AGAIN!
    When Darren said he was moving out, I was sad because most of the humor comes from the fact that she can't get away from him because he lives with her. But then Annie pounded the table and was like, "You're staying," and I was like, "Yeah! You tell 'em!" And then he kissed her and she slapped him; that and his funny reactions are always so adorable.
    Well, that's my random rant for the day.
    August 1st, 2011 at 02:40pm
  • Wanderlust.

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    Oh my good golly gosh that was just an awesome explanation that only you could come up with
    His heart breaking smile -sad sigh- I just wanted to give him a hug
    No worries! I'm sure no one cares it took 17 chapters
    August 1st, 2011 at 10:12am