Open Your Eyes - Comments

YAY can't wait till they see each other... Please update soon i LOVE this story...

Good chappie! Ooh can't wait to see what happens when they see each other! Hope to see more soon! Xx

Poor brian<3 :/ Lisa is having a girl:D Erin is in cali again,yaaay(:
Can't wait for Erin to run into Brian:D
Update again soon?(:

I am absolutely in LOVE with this story! I read the first one in one night lol, can't wait for the rest! Keep up the amazing work <3

Just read the first two chaps... looking good so far! Hope to see an update soon xx

I'm glad she's back in California. Now her and Brian just need to work things out. I think a Zack/Lisa spin off would be awesome! :)

I love the two chapters what a great way to start off. It sounds like Jimmy would do something like that, he was such an amazing person and helped out anyway he can. It's truly rare to find someone just like him. Anyone is lucky to have a great friend like Jimmy. Sounds like Brian is going off the deep end by sleeping with hundreds of women and drowning himself in liquor for losing two people in his life. I wonder if it got worse when Jimmy past, or if he started when Erin dumped him. So many questions left unanswered. can't wait for more

Every chapter of this story blows me away. It always has so much detail, and the very fact that it's written in third person omniscient is just amazing to me. I've never been able to write a story that I was satisfied with or felt comfortable writing in that point of view, but sweetheart, it's definitely your forte.

Your description of Brian's current state is outstanding. I think that it represents any man's emotional status after losing the woman he loves and his best friend, as well. Overall, it's just a wonderful story and I look forward to reading every update.

P.S. You know I'd be all over a Zach and Lisa spin-off. I think those two are great together, and I really like that Zach's taken on a fatherly role with Ben.

My heart aches for Brian. I can't wait until they finally see each other again! Hopefully that will happen before the guys start a mob to go kick his ass haha. I would LOVE to read a spin off! It would be kinda cool to see another side of this series. (Best word I could think of to describe these amazing stories!) Especially if there is another one :)

This is getting to be as good as the first one. Keep going please!

Oh Brian, what a mess. I feel kinda bad for him. Though all this isnt ENTIRELY his fault, he sure isnt handling this well. At all. Erin should have cut the boy a little slack, though, if I ever found out about what Zack had seen, i dont know if i'd want to take him. The have a fight and brian gets a different girl (granted its been six months) but still, who knows how many hes had. And obviously his and Erin's relationship was that important to him, else he would have done something about it.

Im too tired to go back and read my tiny comment, so its probably disconnected and has no flow, but what ever.

Right! Cant wait for the next update!

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Oh Brian, what a mess. I feel kinda bad for him. Though all this isnt ENTIRELY his fault, he sure isnt handling this well. At all. Erin should have cut the boy a little slack, though, if I ever found out about what Zack had seen, i dont know if i'd want to take him. The have a fight and brian gets a different girl (granted its been six months) but still, who knows how many hes had. And obviously his and Erin's relationship was that important to him, else he would have done something about it.

Im too tired to go back and read my tiny comment, so its probably disconnected and has no flow, but what ever.

Right! Cant wait for the next update!

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Amazing! thank you for such a long chapter :)
I think it's great, poor brian by the way... Man hore again

I love this! I seriously can't wait to see what happens between Brian and Erin! And I would love a Zacky and Lisa spinoff!

I loved this update, and I know I say that everytime but I fricken love this story. I think the fact that Lisa and Zacky are expecting is adorable. I'm happy for them lol. I think somewhere down the road the guys will ask Erin for help in order to get Brian back on track with his life. I know personally I'd like to see more about Lisa and Zacky's relationship and what led up to where they are now. spectacular update! I can't wait for the next one. =)

i loved your first story and how you made the characters come to life and from what i have read so far of this one it showing the same if not more promise keep up the good work!

Jimmy was the best:/
But great chapter!

Oh, this story.
Or the sequel, should I say. It's wonderful already. It's really difficult, I think, for anyone to write a story in which Jimmy has passed, so I praise you for having the courage to do that and I'm looking forward to what I can already see is a very dramatic, twisting and winding story.

Love it already!!!! Keep posting :)

Awwwww. that was sweet.