May 28th, 2011 at 04:14am
Open Your Eyes - Comments
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dang it no brian in the first chapter but hopefully they will be around each other in chapter 2. please update soon, and i am glad that you have started the sequel now we just need brian and erin together or at least hang out.May 28th, 2011 at 12:02am
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That was sad but it was an awesome update. Update soon please.May 27th, 2011 at 03:38pm
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YAYS ITS STARTED!!!! ty for the update def cant wait for more.May 27th, 2011 at 02:29pm
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Brilliant start to what's sure to be an amazing story!
You chose a great time and place to set the first chapter, actually.
Most people would probably have started it with her hearing about Jimmy's death and being absolutely devastated, which she obviously was at one point, but now she's started to move on, and the reade's can still see that his passing killed her, but they aren't being overloaded with depressed, angsty characters.
Anyway, enough of the novel. This is great, and you must update soon!May 27th, 2011 at 12:25pm -
awhhh amazinggg!May 27th, 2011 at 12:21pm
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i loved it, i cant wait to see where it goes :)May 27th, 2011 at 11:52am
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I really loved this chapter! I was so happy when I got the email, I think there may have been some clapping involved. =) I'm gald that Erin is going to honor Jimmy by taking the job and I'm glad that Corinne guilt tripped her into taking it as well. I'm happy that you decided to give flashbacks of Jimmy and I think the way you wrote it was exceptional. I'm excited for Erin to move to California and hopefully start to hang out with everyone from her past. I hope she eventually forgives Brian and they get back together because they were an amazing couple, with that said i'm done with my mini rant. =) GREAT JOB!May 27th, 2011 at 11:31am
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YAY! I <3 this! I got so excited when I got the email! I think I will love this story as much if not more than Just Say Yes :) I can't wait for another update.May 27th, 2011 at 11:05am
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Wow. I'm so excited. More soon!May 27th, 2011 at 10:32am
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The prequel was extremely good! Can't wait until you start the second story! It better be as AWESOME as the first! :)May 26th, 2011 at 06:18am
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I loved the first one I'm sure I will love this one :) can't wait for chapters to start flying :PMay 18th, 2011 at 02:14am
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Please start posting soon! I love this story to much ahha! Can't wait.May 17th, 2011 at 04:30am
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Omg you havent even written anything but just the beautiful ending of just say yes but tears in my eyes. Uggg i just knew you were going to do this haha you gave a hitn when Brian said he couldnt be writte a song all by himself. I love it though.May 16th, 2011 at 10:45pm
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Yay! I'm so excited for this sequel! I will more than likely cry at some point during this story because I did get sad reading the summary. Well no matter what, I know you'll write it the way it's supposed to be written. You have definitely made me an extreme loyal reader to all of your stories, and commenter as well. =)May 16th, 2011 at 10:43pm
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Can't wait! looking forward to seeing what happens between erin and brian :) loved 'just say yes'... hope this one is just as good! xxMay 16th, 2011 at 07:26pm
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Can't wait to read this story! :)May 16th, 2011 at 06:35pm
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I can't wait for this story to be up!!!
I absolutely loved the first one!!May 16th, 2011 at 05:08pm -
I loved the first story, now I am really exicted for this one :) xMay 16th, 2011 at 05:02pm
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WOOHOOO!!!! Can't wait to read this...May 16th, 2011 at 04:49pm
waiting for the next part