May 20th, 2011 at 01:36am
More?! please?! I LOVE IT!!!
Sincerely,
imaNERD!getitright!
♥a.k.a. Aubrey Rose♥
I figured it out. I was freaking out for this whole chapter thinking about how I don't have very many comments and how people must just hate this chapter and not like the sequel, but then I woke up this morning, and saw your comment and suddenly everything is better. I think it's because I associate your comments with a chapter being complete.
- MarriahShadows:
- This first chapter was sheer brilliance. I loved it. The descriptions, the emotions, the whole feel of it was simply fantastic. I am not gonna lie when I say I would have yelled out loud when I saw that this was up, except I was in a public place when I saw and I had to refrain from cheering out loud. But I seriously couldn't wipe the smile off of my face.
Anyway, even though the chapter was short, I thought it was perfect as an introduction to the story and the events that are going to happen. When I saw that bit about rogue wolves going crazy, my stomach kind of knotted up. I am so eager to find out what's going to happen
I loved how there was very little actual dialogue at the end of the chapter.
But why are the rogue wolves going crazy and attacking?
When I read about the men in black suits, I immediately thought of the Men In Black movies and how their job is to control aliens and your men in black (along with the council) are in charge of wolves, I don't know, I found it funny. :)
The Werewolf Council, more commonly known as the Council, was a powerful group that comprised of five werewolves feared by all. These five men were both feared and adored; loved and hated. They held every secret you ever revealed and knew your mistakes to come. And when that mistake came, the Council would deal with you accordingly.
Once the men in black suits came, your life ended.
I loved those parts.
Okay, I'm done now.
Looking forward to the next update. :)
I'm glad you liked it! :D I also like when stories start off action based. It gives the reader...something. lol.
- JamieJo:
- Yaaaayyyy! This was such a good introduction! It really set the story up amazingly, I love it when a story starts off with action because I'm kinda an action buff haha! Oh, and I love the picture you have on the layout :) <3
I really liked how you described Joshua and his "tiny red demons", the part about him going crazy I guess over the husband and wife and their baby was so creepily good!
I can't wait for more <3
Sunny-Lee <3