On the Outskirts of Manhattan - Comments

Ava and Dawson <3 ahh! lovin' it to the max :D

Ava and Dawson <3 ahh! lovin' it to the max :D

This was a great read just like the original. I'm looking forward to the possible next one! I def cant wait for more :) awesome work my dear

“I can't stay here,” Dawson finally spoke up. He glanced at Riley who was staring out the window. “I'm in love with her.”
“I know,” Riley said. His voice was neither angry or upset. He simply spoke. “I counted on you to not fall in love with her, but you did it anyways.”
There was silence around the room. The accusation in Riley's voice was evident. He no longer trusted Dawson as a friend, as an employee or even as a fellow Council member.
“It's not really something you can help,” Dawson pointed out. “You did it. The only difference between you and I is that she loves me back.”

I just LOVED that entire thing... it made me chuckle... and it was like Dawson physically pointed at Riley and yelled, "You did it! ...she LOVES ME, so HA!" Hahaha.

Ava almost groaned. He called him “Uncle Riley”. The one man that she couldn't stand had her son calling him “Uncle”.

HAHHAAHA.

... It's over... :< I'm saddened, but it was just such a captivating story. I'm never too fond of werewolf stories, but I really loved this one. Really, Sunny. You did an awesome job.

Well, it's over...for now. :( I'm just sad that I won't be able to read your updates for a while. But I can't wait for the next part to begin, because I'm sure it will be just as awesome as GWM and OTOOM were! Good luck with everything until then, and when you're back, I'll be back reading and commenting! :) Take care!

Love it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Wow I wasn't expecting Ava to go into full on wolf mode but she did what she had to do, Ryder died and Ava feels sad about it but in a way he brought this on himself if he just walked away after the council denied his request he wouldn't be dead, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

"Ava was his."

His. Hehe.

Felix... in my head... became a hyperactive crazy wolf that developed an odd twitch. Like, that's just how I pictured him in my head. lol

“Don't leave!” His face was pained as she took steps back from him. He had an emotional attachment to her; he wanted her to stay with him. Forever."

Hmm. Got this weird vibe that I can't explain... like it's creepy, but at the same time, understandable... Hmm...

Sad.

Hmm. Not sure what to think right now :(

Cali's Mommy:

Finally! I have been waiting for Ryder and Ava to come face to face since I read about him in GWM! :) Even though you never REALLY answered my question about it way back then, you kind of hinted at the fact that I was correct, so I knew this would happen sooner or later. Ava us just an awesome being and I'm so glad that Dawson took care of Carly so easily. That'll teach her!! :) Awesome update. I'm sad that it's almost over, but can't wait for the sequel, even if it's going to be a while. Keep up the great work! You ROCK! :D

Heh heh. Well, I couldn't give it away, but I couldn't NOT answer you at the same time because I was so excited that someone FINALLY figured it out. haha :)

YOU rock :)

Finally! I have been waiting for Ryder and Ava to come face to face since I read about him in GWM! :) Even though you never REALLY answered my question about it way back then, you kind of hinted at the fact that I was correct, so I knew this would happen sooner or later. Ava us just an awesome being and I'm so glad that Dawson took care of Carly so easily. That'll teach her!! :) Awesome update. I'm sad that it's almost over, but can't wait for the sequel, even if it's going to be a while. Keep up the great work! You ROCK! :D

MoMo_92:

HOLY CHEESE BALLS THEY KNOW EACH OTHER?!!?!!?!!?!?!?!?!??! but right now I'm in becuz I did not see tht coming at all like seriously who would have thunk tht the guy who started this war was her high school ex boyfriend just but enough of the shock factor this asshole kidnapped her son he is goin down and I'm sure the look on Carly's face when she found out about Dawson being the sixth member of the Council was priceless she was like haha bitch thts wat u get for being nosy and being a traitor karma comes and bites u and I mean literally Dawson went mega wolf mode on ur ass fuckin bitch, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I really enjoyed all the smilies you used! I also like that I surprised you with Ryder, even though I feel like if you re-read GWM, you would have caught onto the name similarity.

I'm glad that Dawson got to go into major wolf mode. I feel like a lot of people were seeing him as insignificant compared to Ava's power. So, it's nice to see that he's super powerful too.

HOLY CHEESE BALLS THEY KNOW EACH OTHER?!!?!!?!!?!?!?!?!??! but right now I'm in becuz I did not see tht coming at all like seriously who would have thunk tht the guy who started this war was her high school ex boyfriend just but enough of the shock factor this asshole kidnapped her son he is goin down and I'm sure the look on Carly's face when she found out about Dawson being the sixth member of the Council was priceless she was like haha bitch thts wat u get for being nosy and being a traitor karma comes and bites u and I mean literally Dawson went mega wolf mode on ur ass fuckin bitch, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I didn't realize I didn't click the chapter and started reading the summary and was like, "._. Sunny's going back in time." Hahaha.

The blond receptionist!! Aaaand... "My name's Dawson Kennedy. Nice to meet you." Heh. Totally nonchalant in my head; which makes it that much funnier.

Felix became a masochist.

*hides*

...NOOOOO. He's evil. NO high school memories allowed.

Wowzers!! I was not expecting to her to know him!!

You're such a great writer!! I feel like I'm in the story. :) Keep up the awesome work!! :)

Cali's Mommy:

Awesome update! Can't wait for the next one. I'm sad it's almost over though. :( I hope you have another sequel planned because there is so much more you can do with thisseries. I just hope the saga continues!

I do have another sequel planned, I'm just not writing it right now. I need a break from this series. However, I understand that if you stay subscribed to a story, you get updated when the first chapter of it's sequel is posted. :)

Glad you liked it :)

Awesome update! Can't wait for the next one. I'm sad it's almost over though. :( I hope you have another sequel planned because there is so much more you can do with thisseries. I just hope the saga continues!

imaNERD!getitright!:

I'm so excited! Please update soon! I'm thankful for the update but pumped for the next one... this update was an amazing early 16th birthday present. (: I love this series!!

Happy 16th Birthday!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
I post every 2 weeks to the day :)

I'm so excited! Please update soon! I'm thankful for the update but pumped for the next one... this update was an amazing early 16th birthday present. (: I love this series!!

*squeals* I can't wait!!! Thanks for the update :) loved it!!