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  • cindycannibal

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    Love the new update more plsae
    August 13th, 2011 at 01:56pm
  • JimJams90

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    Absolutely loved it. You ended it so well. And now, I am off to read the sequel!!!
    GT x
    August 12th, 2011 at 05:33am
  • MAGK

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    I absolutely loved this story. Whenever I saw "Mibba story update notification" in my inbox for this story, I couldn't wait to read it. I'm sad to see it end, but the sequel will make up for it. =D
    YAY JIMMY'S ALIVE AGAIN!!!!!!!
    August 11th, 2011 at 09:10pm
  • saint james.

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    I can't believe it's finally over I loved the last chapter it was so sad. I can't wait to read the first chapter of the sequel it sounds really good.
    August 11th, 2011 at 07:04pm
  • cindycannibal

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    Love the new update more please
    August 11th, 2011 at 03:50am
  • mistery gurl

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    loved it, so she is a ghost now?
    August 10th, 2011 at 07:39am
  • saint james.

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    I loved the chapter! Jimmy finally gets to live again with his friends and family all because of Ash. I can't wait for the next update and the sequel!
    August 10th, 2011 at 04:28am
  • JimJams90

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    This was an amazing chapter and I am excited for the next one, but I am even more excited for the sequel! I hope your problems get better!

    GT x
    August 10th, 2011 at 01:17am
  • Alexandrias Nitemare

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    totally loving this story an i cant believe it actually worked but im excited to see the sequel too XD cant wait for the update!!!
    August 9th, 2011 at 11:56pm
  • moka4246

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    Yay, glad to hear that your bite mark(s) have just about healed. Like another user said in a comment above me, you can always message me - I'm always here for people whether or not they're my friends. :-)

    As far as the story goes, I absolutely love, love, love this chapter - so bittersweet. I almost cried when Jimmy came back to life in the end. If only that were the case in real life. Can't wait to read the remainder of this story - I'm absolutely loving it. Can't wait for Ash & Brian to be back together again, even if it's not til the sequel.

    Keep up the wonderful work. ^__^
    August 9th, 2011 at 11:35pm
  • Acadia.Is.Gone

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    I can't even describe what i'm feeling right now. I'm actually like almost shaking. I'm sorry, I can't form a coherent sentence. It's so ugh, annoying that she's not with them, at least for the remainder of this story, but i'm excited for the sequel.
    Also, I know this is probably over said but if you want to talk, i'm always here, feel free to inbox me. I've faced my own slew of erm, issues? and if you need someone to talk/vent/whatever to I promise I'll be here if you need me.
    August 9th, 2011 at 11:21pm
  • Mental Fiction

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    I voted to a sequel too! (sorry if I came late ;) ) I'm loving this story (as i have told you before) and I'm waiting for more :DDD
    August 7th, 2011 at 10:14pm
  • cindycannibal

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    Love the new update more please
    August 7th, 2011 at 10:50am
  • mistery gurl

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    can we get brians POV from when she left? and maybe if jimmy goes back to being human, his reaction then?
    August 3rd, 2011 at 11:05am
  • Alexandrias Nitemare

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    RAWR i loved it but i cant wait to see what happens its making me so anxious to see what happens when she tries bringing jimmy back to life fully cant wai to see the next update XD
    August 2nd, 2011 at 07:49pm
  • moka4246

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    Awww, I love this chapter. I'm gonna miss the closeness between those 2.

    I can't wait for the next update. I also vote for the sequel - I wish there could be more scenes between her and Brian, but idk if there will be.

    Hope your hand feels better soon. ^__^
    August 2nd, 2011 at 05:33pm
  • mistery gurl

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    what if jimmy somehow leaves his number where she will find it, or something like that, then theyll talk again. i vote a sequel :)
    July 29th, 2011 at 07:42am
  • CheYenneDisAster

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    I love your story. Its not full of that typical "instant love" stuff and is based off of whatever you wanted it to be. Originality. I think you should do the sequal, bc idk if i can handle the wait lol. Soorry for being a quiet reader until now.
    July 28th, 2011 at 01:44am
  • xmistressxofxhellx

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    I would love for a sequel next. And then after that a new story. I love your story. I cant wait for another update
    July 27th, 2011 at 10:55pm
  • psycho_cinderella

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    I suddenly get the title... I think. :')
    If you leave this on a cliff hanger and don't write a sequel I will bug you till you do! n___n
    July 27th, 2011 at 10:32pm