Bittersweet Sundown - Comments

That was a very interesting chapter - wasn't expecting that in the least. I really loved it. :-)

I would like the sequel before the new story - it seems like it would fit better that way.

You should do the sequel before the new story. :}

Wow ... I did NOT see that coming!!! But I'm glad it did! It's awesome, and it seems to fit and flow with the story too,. And you know what my vote will be ... SEQUEL!!!

GT x

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Love the new update more please

Hey so I just read up to your last update... and I can easily say that I am addicted to this story. Its fantastic. Ash has made some interesting decisions when it comes to Brian and her life. I love this story (:

but him being mean to her is what most people would do in the real world,
cant wait for more

heeey

love the story have been reading it for a while now,
funny as hell chapter ;D
but i hope that in the next chapter something happens between brian and ash (lee)
have been waiting 2 chapters now and still noting :(
but they where also good chapter so don't worry :P

well hope you update soon again and keep up the awesome writing

xoxoxo

Wooo another update :) I enjoyed this, I can't wait to see what Brian's gonna do next!
Update soon please :)
GT x

where is the rest??? :D I'm totally addicted! you just got a fan from portugal! your writing is amazing and the story *.* i don't have words to describe... its incredible! Uptade as fast as you can :D i'm curious :D keep doing the great, awesome job :D

I just found your story and I'm totally adicted! You're really good and I'm loving this! uptade soon please :D

Damn go Val u the women. I love how Val yelled at Brian for being a douche more please

THANK YOU :)
it was really good!!!! i just hope he doesnt start a fight with zack,
coz hes all jelous man the guys will not be happy if he starts saying hurtful
shit to her, and stops her from hanging out with the group coz he makes her feel so shitty
update again soon?

I loved the update. I understand how Brian would feel about being stood up but he didn't have to act so mean to Ash and accusing her of toying with them all and using them when she is clearly not. I want to know what Brian has up his sleeve and what his plan is. I cant wait for the next update!

I think it was a good idea for a Brian POV. And you did it good, I try and avoid any other POV's because I don't really know how guy's think either, but you did good. It still flowed with the rest of the story and didn't seem out of place!
Update soon please :)
GT x

wow, can we get brians POV? like whats going through his mind? coz i reckon after she left him and then when her and zack come up from the basement hes not gonna be a happy camper

Loved it once again. I like how nice Z is being to her, although it would be good for Bri to be nice again, but that's how it's got to go! Update soon please :)
GT x

<33 Up-date again soon! =D

I've been away for like 10 days for my graduation so it was lush coming back and being able to read this! Absolutely loved it, glad they are finally having a bit of fun!
Update soon please :)
GT x

Love the new update more please