July 27th, 2011 at 09:41pm
Bittersweet Sundown - Comments
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You should do the sequel before the new story. :}July 27th, 2011 at 07:59pm
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Wow ... I did NOT see that coming!!! But I'm glad it did! It's awesome, and it seems to fit and flow with the story too,. And you know what my vote will be ... SEQUEL!!!
GT xJuly 27th, 2011 at 07:00pm -
Can't wait to see what happens next!July 27th, 2011 at 05:25pm
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Love the new update more pleaseJuly 26th, 2011 at 08:47am
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Hey so I just read up to your last update... and I can easily say that I am addicted to this story. Its fantastic. Ash has made some interesting decisions when it comes to Brian and her life. I love this story (:July 26th, 2011 at 07:55am
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but him being mean to her is what most people would do in the real world,
cant wait for moreJuly 26th, 2011 at 06:47am -
heeey
love the story have been reading it for a while now,
funny as hell chapter ;D
but i hope that in the next chapter something happens between brian and ash (lee)
have been waiting 2 chapters now and still noting :(
but they where also good chapter so don't worry :P
well hope you update soon again and keep up the awesome writing
xoxoxoJuly 25th, 2011 at 10:50pm -
Wooo another update :) I enjoyed this, I can't wait to see what Brian's gonna do next!
Update soon please :)
GT xJuly 25th, 2011 at 10:37pm -
where is the rest??? :D I'm totally addicted! you just got a fan from portugal! your writing is amazing and the story *.* i don't have words to describe... its incredible! Uptade as fast as you can :D i'm curious :D keep doing the great, awesome job :DJuly 24th, 2011 at 10:49pm
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I just found your story and I'm totally adicted! You're really good and I'm loving this! uptade soon please :DJuly 24th, 2011 at 06:19pm
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Damn go Val u the women. I love how Val yelled at Brian for being a douche more pleaseJuly 24th, 2011 at 01:05pm
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THANK YOU :)
it was really good!!!! i just hope he doesnt start a fight with zack,
coz hes all jelous man the guys will not be happy if he starts saying hurtful
shit to her, and stops her from hanging out with the group coz he makes her feel so shitty
update again soon?July 24th, 2011 at 07:45am -
I loved the update. I understand how Brian would feel about being stood up but he didn't have to act so mean to Ash and accusing her of toying with them all and using them when she is clearly not. I want to know what Brian has up his sleeve and what his plan is. I cant wait for the next update!July 24th, 2011 at 06:25am
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I think it was a good idea for a Brian POV. And you did it good, I try and avoid any other POV's because I don't really know how guy's think either, but you did good. It still flowed with the rest of the story and didn't seem out of place!
Update soon please :)
GT xJuly 24th, 2011 at 12:05am -
wow, can we get brians POV? like whats going through his mind? coz i reckon after she left him and then when her and zack come up from the basement hes not gonna be a happy camperJuly 22nd, 2011 at 06:22am
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Loved it once again. I like how nice Z is being to her, although it would be good for Bri to be nice again, but that's how it's got to go! Update soon please :)
GT xJuly 22nd, 2011 at 01:44am -
<33 Up-date again soon! =DJuly 21st, 2011 at 11:42pm
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I've been away for like 10 days for my graduation so it was lush coming back and being able to read this! Absolutely loved it, glad they are finally having a bit of fun!
Update soon please :)
GT xJuly 20th, 2011 at 10:58pm -
Love the new update more pleaseJuly 18th, 2011 at 11:15pm
I would like the sequel before the new story - it seems like it would fit better that way.