Bittersweet Sundown - Comments

Great chapter. For a second there I actually thought she had a baby and then it turned otu to be a car but I know I would call my car my baby too. I cant wait for the next update to find out who the mystery person is I have a feeling it could be Sean but then again I could be wrong. Update very soon!

Up-date again soon! I love the story =)

loving your story, cant believe you dont have more comments, please update again soon :)
*suscribes*

Great update like always. I hope Ash made a right choice in giving Brian a second chance and he doesnt fuck it up. I cant wait for more update soon again!

I think I have actually fallen in love with this story, can't wait to see where it is going to go. All of your writing seems so original and I hope it carries on that way. I mean, like you don't go the stereotypical route of them meeting and falling in love straight away, d'you get what I mean?
Pleas update again soon,
GT x

This is so good!

I love this story so much :) I can't wait for the next update :)

Awesome update loved it! It was hilarious when Ash wouldnt wake up and the security guy flashed the light in her eyes. Wonder what is going to happen on there little journey together. I cant wait for the next update!

I love it, I saw on one of your earlier author's note about it being a bit far fetched, but isn't that what stories are about? Letting your imagination go away with you. I love it :)

Update soon please :)

GT x

That update made me chuckle. It was cute. =] I really cant wait for the next update

So, I've just started reading this, and I love it. I love how you have Jimmy as a ghost and how Michelle isn't a bitch like you read in most other stories. It is a very original story. And I must admit, I did go look at that crazy bird on youtube lol
GT x

i love this story ... i found it lastnight and i love it. it's addicting! I love how you have jimmy in it too!

I love this story! Ash and Brian have a very complicated relationship first he is nice to her then he goes back to being an asshole. This plane ride is going to be very interesting. I cant wait for more please update soon!

I thought Matt was gonna get hit! Nice job! :D Update soon, please!

Wow I hope that she isnt hurt to much. Update soon please.

<333 loove the story! Up-date again soon! =D

Wow I cant believe that Brian said that to her. Update soon.

lmao love this story to pieces pretty pants really lol

I loveee the story, Keep updatinn i wanna read more!!!:)

I really like the story especially this last chapter!!