March 30th, 2007 at 10:10pm
Better off as Lovers - Comments
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thanks =]March 30th, 2007 at 01:24am
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wow.
everyday theres a billion more updates!
its really really good.
poor bren!
poor sohep!
MOOOOOOOREMarch 29th, 2007 at 10:11pm -
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haha thannnnnnnnnnks.
greatgreatgreat update =]
more soon?March 29th, 2007 at 12:33am -
thanks i'm flattered =] i lurve your icon by the way. it made me laugh :lol:March 27th, 2007 at 03:01am
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wowers
lota of updateS!
love it!
YAY FOR SOHEP AND BREN!
MORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRReMarch 27th, 2007 at 02:16am -
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pooor soheppppppp.
i have a bad feeling about this alex.
LOL
MORRRRRRRRRRRRE.March 25th, 2007 at 09:14pm -
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awwwwwww.
love it but its sad!
MRE MORE MORE!March 24th, 2007 at 05:32pm -
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i LOVE this!
UUUPPPDAATTTE!March 23rd, 2007 at 01:06am -
This story has great potential.
The only advice I would give you is that you should properly format your paragraphs: When you have a new speaker in dialogue then you should create a new paragraph.
Example:
"Hi, said Bob. "Hello," said Sally.
Should read:
"Hi," said Bob.
"Hello," said Sally.
Not only is it proper grammar but it also eases any confusion that might occur on the readers part. (:March 17th, 2007 at 05:44am -
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I read it over again.
'Tis even better the second time.March 9th, 2007 at 07:52pm -
Awww....
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This story is sooo cute!
Write more....
Now...March 4th, 2007 at 09:51pm -
I LOVE YOUR STORY KEEP ON WRITING!February 28th, 2007 at 06:59pm
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This is really good so far! :D
More soon!February 26th, 2007 at 02:55am -
OMG I LIKE LOVE THIS STORY IT'S SOOOO GOOD! KEEP WRITING LUV YA ALWAYS AND 4-EVA U KNOW WHO! :DFebruary 25th, 2007 at 10:42pm
haha.