June 8th, 2011 at 10:46am
=O I like the title of this chapter very much. I know I never say anything about the chapter titles, but my astrology sign is cancer--meaning I'm very attuned to the water. ^_^
First, I just adore how the horse is her friend. I'm sorry, but it spoke straight to my animal-loving-heart.
" During her time in this place, she had come to learn the the horse was the only friend that she had."
^I think you meant learn that the horse. XD
I feel a little sorry for Eloise. Being stuck at the estate and already knowing that she is to give up her baby? I'd be well into depression if I were her. And still, she has enough attitude against Charlotte! My my, the girl is tough.
UPDATE SOON! <3
He. Did. Not. Just. Forbid. Her. Leave. No, no, no! I thought he was the good guy! You are making me begin to dislike Ewen as well. Why must you make me dislike all the males? =( Even Lawrence has turned mean-ish. This makes me sad.
I finally found one thing you could improve on, by the way. I've been craving action! XD Aha, I think your story would simply perfect with more action! <3
UPDATE SOON! <3