Soulless - Comments

Bah, you do love to confuse this little heart of mine, huh? I told you I hated him, so you went and made it seem like he was this guy just afraid of his love. Of course, I know you warned me, but I still hate being torn like I am right now. I still hate him, though. He destroyed his chances when he locked her up.

Okay, enough rambling about John. I LOVE this chapter. It's so sweet compared to the last three. I love watching as your story progresses from great to words beyond that. Words that haven't even been made in human kind yet.

But, I did see a few errors in this chapter. Just saying. =D

UPDATE SOON! <3

First off, I'm subscribing.
I love the layout, the dark simplicity.
I also loved the opening sentance for the first chapter. It drew me in, as a good story does.
But this isn't just good...it's great.

She isn't allowed to get drunk! Just because I said so! =P lol, though I suppose being what she is sort of makes it even more difficult for her >_>

My heart melted when you mentioned how she was an 'Angel of Death'. Gah, I don't know why, but I sort of feel enlightened by that thought. XD

Oooooo, I'm very curious to know who this guy is! I think I may like him, despite her disliking how he is her kind. >_<

Oh, she's such a violent young woman, isn't she? Poor Robert. I feel sorry for him. Of course, what she said is true. It does damn us all.

Ouch, a brick? That must hurt like hell!

Once more, UPDATE SOON! Really love, I'm entranced by this story! Keep it up. You're such an amazing writer! <3

Shape-shifter?! She's a shape-shifter?! OMG, I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! It reveals so much but still gives out no details. Gah, I'm on the edge of my seat right now!

I honestly wish I could read more this very instant; but I don't want to push you too hard... =\ Dang, UPDATE SOON! <3 (Or face the consequences... >=D )

Bah, I was a little confused with this chapter--which hopefully will be cleared up tonight in the forth one. Right, sister? >=) My mind kept trying to make the events into the present when they were part of her past. We have done discussed my craziness, though. =P

UPDATE SOON, got it? <3

Everything seemed to really come alive, I LOVED it. Update?(:

Everything seemed to really come alive, I LOVED it. Update?(:

Bahhhh, your right! I love this chapter even more so than the first! You have me thinking she's a vampire, but I am most likely very wrong. And John seems a little... tense. Hmmm...

Once again, UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<3

Just confuse me, why don't ya? I love ya, girl, but you can't stop it there! I need more!

Scrub. Scrub. Scrub. Scrub.
^ I don't know why, but that right there made me view everything that was happening even better than your lovely descriptions! <3

UPDATE SOON, understand? <3

Ooooo, You're killing me here! Gosh! Let's see. I love the layout! It's simple, but dark. I have goosebumps scrolling over my arms right now! The summary sounds sweet! At first, when the person asked "What do you want?" it made me picture someone standing at the front of a war giving a speech.

Sorry, I'm crazy >_< The title is magnificent! I can't wait to read this, love! <3