She Quenched My Thirst - Comments

I loved the ice heart part and the Wizard of Oz parts. She's like their own personal sonogram machine. lol.

update soon

Awesome update!!!!
Jasper!!!! is awesome, lol
XD

Absolutely love this story!!!!! It is freaking AWESOME!!!!

i really enjoy this story , i cant wait for an update .

UPDATE! I'm in love with this story and im going crazy. So update...damn it!!!!!!!

Edward did deserve Stella screaming at him.
Thanks for the shoutout!

Ha! She didn't listen
Stella is still her awesome crazy self, twirling made it even more so.
MORE!!! <--- I sound like the cookie monster XD

I'm not a huge fan of Cullen Twilight fan fics so I'm not going to comment on your content. But it would be cool if you paragraphed your chapters out a bit, because I've heard that people can get reported by other users if they don't paragraph.

This is pretty cool, and it's original that Stella has water controlling powers. Cool job!

Though I must say, like everyone else has, I'am not a big fan of Twilight either but in this circumstance I began to like it. The idea is different and your writing is really well. There was a couple of spelling and grammer mistakes that stood out but I can't complain, I'am the same. Haha. But you got something good happening, keep it up. :)

Even though I don't really like Twilight, this story is good, and I like it. However, there is ALOT of grammar errors. I'll give the spelling an 8/10. It is a little rushy, but so far it's good!

I love your story, it's very creative and puts a nice and different twist to things. So far, chapter 20 is my favorite!!! LOL =D

You should try getting your own layout as it would be nicer to look at whilst reading. If you can't do it, I'm sure if you ask someone they'll do it. :3 The story itself, however, is quite good. You wrote it well and the story is interesting. I'm not a big fan of Twilight but still, it's good. Also, maybe try to space out your paragraphs and lines. It would make it easier to read. Keep writing, I loved it! c:

I liked the story.It explained a lot of the chartaters and the begining was intresting

I love it. I think they layout is really pretty as well. The thing that dragged my in the most was the summery. It made me really want to read into it and find out what happened. I haven't read it all yet, but I will :) .

I love how Stella told Bella not to come home pregnant. Please update soon.

I know that song!!!
I love it XD
Haha, don't come back pregnant Bella!
If only she knew

Asdfghjkl loveee them together!

Update soon :)

yeah I understand It's ok that you don't really like twilight
And I love that you like Jasper too
I'm glad you like my writing that is a good thing
I don;t know how to make layouts so I just choose whatever is an option
that's why my profile is so boring
Thanks for reading it :)

Sorry it took me so long to comment. I read it all, so it took me a while. heh.

Well, I mean, I used to be obsessed with Twilight. I loved it. But now I kinda don't like it at all, sorry.

But, I tried to go back into my Twilight phase while reading this, so that I could leave a good comment that wasn't ruined by my preference, you know what I mean?

And it kinda actually worked, mostly because I love your writing. So yeah. And Jasper is my favorite, so that helped too.

I don't really like the layout, but whatever. The story matters more and I can't really tell you anything to make it better, cuz I can't think of anything. xD But that's a good thing!! Haha.

Keep writing.