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  • Error-00

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    Stella is awesome! I love her!
    This story is very interesting and unique. More soon!
    June 29th, 2011 at 08:05pm
  • teen spirit.

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    Okay so this is pretty good. I like the layout, it's very easy to read and the story itself is nice. The plotline isn't the most original but whatever. That's one thing you'll have to watch put for, because if
    you don't your story may become very cliche. Another thing is that you should put more details, but instead of telling us stuff try to show them. Your grammar is pretty good but just make sure your dialogue fits the story. She's a 19-year old girl, she won't talk like that. Anyways, I see true potential in this story and I think it could go far. <3 (:
    June 29th, 2011 at 03:08pm
  • Cobain.

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    So, I only read the first few chapters but I will definitely continue reading this. I'm not usually a fan of Twilight/Twilight-fan-fics, but this story was really well-written and I was able to enjoy it anyway. Nice. (:
    June 28th, 2011 at 04:46am
  • purpleamethyst

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    Lol someone made me lose the game when i was writting that chapter XD
    June 25th, 2011 at 01:18am
  • StiltzScreamsRemedy

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    I just read Chapter 14, and that authors note at the bottom... I hate you, js. >.< I lost the game.
    June 25th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • The Hallows

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    Awwwwww so cute :D!
    Update soon!
    June 24th, 2011 at 10:44pm
  • nicolecullen

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    Ahhhhh it's a cliff hanger !! Please update soon :D
    June 21st, 2011 at 09:03pm
  • The Hallows

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    Jasper and Stella!
    Awwwwwwww I love this chapter, not just because it's dedicated to me ;)

    Update soooonnnn
    June 21st, 2011 at 08:54pm
  • NikkixNik_

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    I like this
    June 21st, 2011 at 08:04pm
  • WatchesFromShadows

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    This story is so cute! =D Finally a vampire with a good sense of humor, I mean, sheesh. =/ I hope Seth will be a big part of the story!!! Keep up the awesomness! - WatchesFromShadows
    June 21st, 2011 at 07:42am
  • purpleamethyst

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    [http://www.polyvore.com]stella's outfit[/www.polyvore.com/red_rihanna/set?id=32781729]
    link?
    I feel stupid trying to do it right -_-
    June 20th, 2011 at 03:48am
  • SoccergirlBianca

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    Seth is such a cutie pie!!!!!! can't wait till next update.
    June 20th, 2011 at 03:43am
  • xuanny

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    awh that chap was cute aha i thought jacob was gonna imprint on her for a sec :P updates ya?
    June 19th, 2011 at 12:59pm
  • The Hallows

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    I feel so bad for her!

    I hope she goes back to the Cullen's :D

    Update soon!!
    June 19th, 2011 at 03:24am
  • two sided heart

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    I really love this story and for an idea I think Stella should go to port angeles for more books or for a journal so she can write about her feeelings for jasper
    and when she's there she runs into Seth who I kinda. Believe is her imprint then they exchange numbers and idk what ever else but first Stella should go for a run in the woods and meet Seth in his wolf form and just play hide and seek . That is my idea ;) please update soon
    June 17th, 2011 at 12:18am
  • xuanny

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    ha i like it idk maybe one of jasper and alice fighting? alice must have seen jasper and stella together .
    update!
    June 17th, 2011 at 12:06am
  • SoccergirlBianca

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    i really like this story and i hope you update soon.
    June 14th, 2011 at 08:55am
  • The Hallows

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    Yay! You updated :D
    June 13th, 2011 at 12:32am
  • The Hallows

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    haha I just noticed it actually linked it but this is how you do it:

    [url=DIRECT LINK HERE]Text here[/url]

    hope it helps!
    June 12th, 2011 at 06:41pm
  • The Hallows

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    I love, love loveeeeeee this story!
    UPDATE ASAP! :D

    this is how you link stuff:
    Masen's Outfit
    (thats for one of my stories but thats how you do it,i hope it helped!)
    June 12th, 2011 at 06:39pm
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