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    I read the first chapter about two months ago, I think. Then I hadn't got the chance to read the other chapters because I'm back to college and my college kinda bans mibba which is suck. Now, I'm on holiday and I got to read this story again. Yeay!!

    I just love, love, love Morgan and Spencer's relationship. I think it's really adorable. And I like how perceptive Spencer is. I don't watch the show so I'm not really familiar with their characters in the show. But I think you portray them both well and I can't imagine them being any other way. Am I making any sense here?

    Anyway, this is a great story and don't stop updating. Even though I can't read it the moment you post an update, I'll surely read it whenever I got the chance. ^_^
    August 2nd, 2011 at 08:28am
  • poisongirl24

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    Spencer. Why are you so adorable?
    August 2nd, 2011 at 07:05am
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    I'm sure if I had a story this awesome, comments would make my day, too.
    August 1st, 2011 at 08:18am
  • YoungandLoadedKid

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    Morgan is just trying to rape Spence. I mean like when he said of course at the end of the chapter I was like ohhh damn shit is about to get real! lmfao.

    Anyway great story continue it. :D
    August 1st, 2011 at 07:26am
  • figwmwrtbb

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    Yay they found the bad guy :) But Spencer opened his wound back up :( I can't wait to see what happens on the drive home lol. Oh and Spence messing up the magic trick was funny :3
    August 1st, 2011 at 04:00am
  • Flying Flawed

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    PAGE CLAIM! <3
    August 1st, 2011 at 02:50am
  • Flying Flawed

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    I want the next one, like, now!
    August 1st, 2011 at 02:49am
  • Pertisimo

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    This was super. I've only ever seen one episode of this show (gargh hate that they don't show it in England... not to my knowledge anyway!) but I can tell that you have nailed the characters perfectly and you have really kept the style of the show within your writing, which is a really hard thing to be able to do, in my opinion anyway. This creative yet horrifying case has unfolded very well, and I'm glad the serial killer has finally been caught! I also love how it isn't just about Derek and Spencer and that you've got lots of other action in on the plot which makes it all the more exciting to read :)
    Overall I'm loving the creativity of this and I look forward very much to the next update! Great job you guys!
    August 1st, 2011 at 01:35am
  • Flying Flawed

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    LOVED IT!!!
    OMG it was sooo good, had me laughing most of the time!
    July 31st, 2011 at 04:58pm
  • fun ghoul fez.

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    So this comment is really going to suck because I am completely and utterly overwhelmed by how sweet that ending was. Seriously, you set the conversation up perfectly; I may or may not have squealed. :D
    July 30th, 2011 at 01:18am
  • JessLoui

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    awwwwwwww its sooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute
    July 29th, 2011 at 12:58am
  • poisongirl24

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    Gah! XD you wouldn't believe how happy i was to see this! Spencer and Morgan, pretty hot couple ;D

    And that last chapter had me smiling like an idiot! Please keep updating!
    July 27th, 2011 at 08:10am
  • Flying Flawed

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    loved it so adorable
    July 25th, 2011 at 05:58am
  • figwmwrtbb

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    Awwe Spencer asked Derek on a date ^_^ And I'm happy that Spencer is okay :)
    I really hate how everyone else's comments are so much longer and more in depth than mine :( But oh well I guess :3
    July 25th, 2011 at 04:45am
  • audreyhorne

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    Okay, so I don't watch Criminal Minds as much as a bunch of other commenters seem to, but I do watch it enough to love this story. Like turducken. said, the quote in the summary seems to wrap up the entire show basically. I absolutely love that.

    I'm usually not a big fan of fan-fiction, but this seems almost like an original fiction, so that was definitely a plus for me.

    The case they're working on... wow, how awful. It's really sad, honestly. I was hoping Darcy wouldn't die, though; she was super cute. But you know, moves the plot along. Makes me hate the killer a lot more.

    This sticks pretty well with the plot of Criminal Minds, too, and I love that. It's a very promising story, I can tell you that much. The relationship between Spencer and Derek is a little different, but I like it. It's good that way. :D There should always be a little change or else there's not reason in reading the fan-fiction because, well... I can just watch the show.

    I love this story, seriously. :D Great work. <3
    July 25th, 2011 at 04:32am
  • figwmwrtbb

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    Oh noes!!! Spencer!!! :( he's gotta be okay cuz Derek needs him :(
    I loved how they were arguing one minute then the next minute Spencer is all "NO! DON'T LEAVE ME!!" I love this story and more soon?
    July 15th, 2011 at 09:48pm
  • fun ghoul fez.

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    This chapter was adorable, in a strange way; I think it really showed Morgan's protective instincts over Reid and I think that it was great that you took the time to build that part of their relationship up before the actual romantic aspect of it starts. That ending actually made my jaw drop; why is poor Reid always the one who gets tortured or hurt? xD Anyways, loved it; can't wait for the next update. :)
    July 15th, 2011 at 04:33am
  • The Hallows

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    AW SPENCE!
    always getting into trouble tsk.

    I hope Derek comes to the rescue, dark chockate sundae haha :)

    Update soon :D
    July 15th, 2011 at 03:42am
  • FictionisTrue12

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    Love it :) they are so into eachother they just don't know what to do about it yet keep going though I want to know what happens next :)
    July 15th, 2011 at 02:48am
  • That Nerdy Chick

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    Oh, I really love this. keep the updates coming!!!
    July 14th, 2011 at 08:47pm