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  • Cali's Mommy

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    Not gonna lie.....it made me cry a little! (: I know you have worked so hard on this story and it has been well worth the wait for every chapter. The wedding and reception were perfect! I knew he wouldn't let her get married without her family and friends, and what an awesome way to go about it, without upsetting her by actually trying to force her to have the big wedding....perfection! Can't wait to read the epilogue....hopefully they will have a little one on the way, or already here, depending on how far you jump ahead! Maybe it's just wishful thinking on my part, but I'd love to see a baby Crosby! :D Again, great job on the story as a whole....you did awesome!
    October 23rd, 2012 at 05:58pm
  • steph1984

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    :') happy happy tears !!! OMG that was perfection. Absolute perfection
    October 23rd, 2012 at 02:34am
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    I'm truly excited for the wedding
    October 8th, 2012 at 09:52pm
  • bxgurl95

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    I think thischapter was damn near perfect and sums up their relationship. They need each other and live to make each other happy. They had a momenr of intensity where sid was hurting and hannah washurting because sid was hurting yet he still manages to be waiting & considerate of her.

    Can't wait to hear about the wedding, I'm sure they both have something planned eventually and it willhave the people they love there.
    I hope that we find out more about phoebe and jordan.

    And the ffact that kris manned up and made ammends was not "fluff" at, completely necessary. I'm subscribing to you're new story as we speak I'm sure it'll be just as captizating.

    <3
    September 27th, 2012 at 01:27pm
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    I like the fluff, it works well at this point in the story. I'm excited to read about their wedding, I'm sure it will be done really well :)
    September 27th, 2012 at 12:24pm
  • soupy

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    This chapter was a mix of all you do well - you highlighted the continuity of story - by referencing Jordan and Zoe and their ongoing relationship - you brought some closure to a past issue with Kris apologizing to Hannah for the way he acted and them both feeling better about their relationship - some sweet fluff with Hannah and Sid skating around alone, making some good memories and last, but definitely not least - your "down and dirty" sex scene in the locker room. My My My, Hannah is sure not that shy virgin anymore...she was secure enough in her relationship with Sid to let herself go. Good for her....and obviously good for Sid!!!

    I am glad that Sid was able to find comfort in Hannah being there - and not just sexually - that having someone to share the bad times, made them not so bad.

    I am interested in the wedding...and will definitely subscribe to your new story!
    September 27th, 2012 at 03:20am
  • jess123

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    Just found this on storey, on chapter 6 and loving it!
    September 27th, 2012 at 02:15am
  • steph1984

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    It's so refreshing to see that Sid didn't act like a spoiled best after the loss to the flyers. And instead (without sounding like a perv) had some good hot sex with Hannah in the locker room !
    I wonder if they remembered to pick his shirt buttons up off the floor :D
    Gosh now I'm blushing haha, but what a fantasy to have.

    It was also good to see that kris finally made amends with Hannah and Sid after that night in the club and all is okay between them.

    The fluff was excellent and just the right amount. They're finally in that perfect place and are ready to take that next step in their relationship.
    I'd never heard that song before so I had a look of it up on you tube. It's perfect for them.

    I can't wait to see their wedding. I know you'll make it perfect for them.
    September 26th, 2012 at 10:00pm
  • bxgurl95

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    I'm patient and I love the way their dual relationships are developing. They really love each other and they are growing and teaching each other things. I can't wait for the next update! and somethings tells me that she's going to have a big wedding because even though they are not public with their relationship she wants him to know just how proud and happy she is. Your character development skills are on point
    September 17th, 2012 at 05:26pm
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    I'm still loving this story :) I really enjoyed this update, hope you update soon!
    September 7th, 2012 at 01:28pm
  • steph1984

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    Perfect update Smile I could read about Sid and Hannah all day every day. I can't wait to see how they finally decide how to get married. I know it's going to se special,romantic and perfect.
    Update it soon Very Happy x
    September 5th, 2012 at 07:44am
  • soupy

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    I think this chapter illustrated Sid and Hannah's strength - that they have come a long way in learning to deal with each other - learning to compromise and talk about issues before their insecurities really take over. Being "in love" is a scarry thing - you really put yourself out there - which means a possibility of being hurt. But it also opens the possibility for great happiness - you have to decide whether it is worth the risk.

    Sid and Hannah both seem to have decided that the risk is worth the reward - and they are helping Phoebe and Jordan see that too. Is it always rainbows and unicorns....no, and Sid and Hannah have had their share of issues....but when all is said and done, they both see life together as the optimal conclusion. They just want to be married!
    September 5th, 2012 at 02:55am
  • tiffanyhabs31

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    Great chap! Update soon!!!!!
    September 5th, 2012 at 01:25am
  • pitts87pens

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    Loved the update, Def still very much into this story. I can see them have a smaller wedding nothing to big...really want to know what Jordan is doing there when they got home. Also, would love to see a JT/PK story some time soon..Hope all is well..
    August 3rd, 2012 at 02:18am
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    Loved the update and still love this story. I don't think I'm ready for it to end either!
    I think Sid and Hannah should have a smaller wedding, it would definitely suit them.
    August 1st, 2012 at 07:54am
  • soupy

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    Glad for the update - and I was really happy that this time it was Hannah who was acting a little irrational. In the past, it had been Sidney who kept messing up and hurting Hannah. At least this time, we got to see that Hannah is not perfect - that she still has some issues that she has to work through...and that Sid isnt always the screw-up!

    As for the wedding, I think there is a happy medium. They can have a small church wedding with family and closer friends - it does not have to be Pittsburgh's equivalent of a Royal Wedding. Nor do they have to do the "City Hall" type. I think both of them have to feel comfortable as it is a very special day. Bigger does not mean better - but they can do small and do it up right.

    It does concern me though that Hannah is voicing concerns about her losing her virginity. While she seems to be getting a bit more adventurous sexually, she may have to talk to someone about her ambivalent feelings about sleeping with Sidney before they were married. It was a major departure for her and maybe she just has to get back to why she made the decision in the first place - or this issue will keep coming up in every fight they have.
    August 1st, 2012 at 04:39am
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    I've just got up to date with this story and I really love it :)
    Sid and Hannah are just perfect together.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!
    July 24th, 2012 at 06:22am
  • Emmy2550

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    Im loving this so far! Sid and Hannah are like, perfect for each other! Im also curious as to how Jord and Phoebe's relationship unfolds!!!!!
    July 15th, 2012 at 07:37am
  • Cali's Mommy

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    They are so perfect together....glad they made up! Can't wait to see what's coming up for them! And definitely can't wait for your new story....I'm sure it will be amazing! :D
    June 27th, 2012 at 06:42pm
  • kyliexo

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    This story is seriously SO amazing. I'm on chapter 22 right now and cannot stop reading it! You should make one about Michael Del Zotto! :D that would be a fun one to read if you make it, too!
    June 26th, 2012 at 11:26pm