That Girl - Comments

Alex is such a cutie! The end was really sweet. I really hope they can stay in Baltimore. Update soon please <3

...how in the WORLD? We have so much in common! Our names are both Tricia/Trisha, we both love Joe Flacco...don't tell me you live in Maryland too...
Anyway, I'm sad now because this story only has one chapter left :(:(:(:(:(:(
But I loved this chapter :):):):):):)
More soon please!!!!!!

No, no, no, no, I protest! It must not end. No. Nnnnnnnno! Let it go on and on and on.
The exchange between Alex and Fin was absolutely adorable, haha, she's finally letting go of her friggin' bad-ass attitude, it's about time! :P
<3

My favorite chapter yet ! :)

What do I think? I think Finley is stupid and stubborn :D
And I think Alex is an adorable idiot.
Sad this is ending though D:

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Cute!
Can't muster much else. Sleepy time. Stayed up just to read this. :D

-kayt

Okay, so, this seems like it's close to ending, because the guy's have been killed and Finley's been shot, a second time...
But I don't want it to end!

-kayt

______________________ OMG! Wow that chapter was amazing! I just.... Wow! Sorry, I'm kinda speechless. <3

Hi, I'm confused about what Alex is lying about. I mean they DID shoot her. So if you could tell me? :)

I loved this update! Update soon!?

I KNEW SHE WAS GONNA GET SHOT. Mothafucker, just had to go and get herself shot... again, I'm gonna have to have a talk with her about this whole survival thing, ya know, like NOT getting shot or getting a gun pointed in her face... those kind of survival things.
And Alex, poor thing getting himself pulled into it, haha, he's like a kicked puppy.
But, not gonna lie, Robert was fuckin' bad ass in this chapter. Good show, Pops, good show!

AHHHH THAT WAS SATISFYINGLY EPIC.
I don't want it to enddddddd :(:(:(:(
More soon please!!!

...At least she didn't get shot in the face like I thought she did.
Ugh, Finley, you stupid girl.

They killed them ! Yayyy !

Well of course you aren't the only one that wants this to end! It's amazing. Possible sequel?
And damn, that was an awesome cliff hanger.

...Are you crazy, of course you're not the only one who doesn't want it to end.
But omg, Finley, no.
Alex- Alex, go save her. Or, rush Robert. FINLEY.

I like really love this and dont want it to end either.... Please update this soon... ITS KILLLING MEE!!!!

Cliffhanger much omg I love this story please update soon <3

The end of the chapter nearly killed me! Please update soon!!! I can't believe the story is almost done :(

Ohmahgod, I'm buggin'!
If she gets her ass shot again, I'm gonna freak out, I can't believe she went by herself!
What does she think she's gonna do against a bunch of armed dudebros? Kill them all and just walk out?
Fat chance, honey!
Ugh, she better make it out alive.
Oh and Alex, good call on telling Pops, good call.

This chapter was something else . I guess it's a good thing that Alex told . Especially since she got caught .