I haven't commented on this story in a while BUT THIS IS LIKE THE BEST STORY I'VE EVER READ ON MIBBA. You are so talented and I wish you the best of luck with you novel. My eyes, and imagination have been blessed with your amazing story. *cries a river of happiness*
I loved the ending, though, at first I thought that she had died. The I was like THANK GOD she didn't cause' that would have been a horrible ending... I liked the way you finished the story. :) I loved the story and I can't wait until I can read more of your work!
HUGEEEE sigh of relief. Oh my goodness I put off reading the last few chapters because I was scared that the ending was going to be sad... So, of course, I got tricked by the beginning of the epilogue (I literally shouted 'NOOOOOOOOOO' at my laptop). But I absolutely love how everything turned out. You have so much talent and you've created such a unique and magical world. I loved every single chapter. You did an amazing job with this c:
I loged this story! It was written so well and I appreciated the amount of detail you put into each arc. It's definitely one of my favorites that I've read on here. Good luck on the rewrite and getting published!
This story was amazing and it will always have a place in my heart. In the last few paragraphs I remembered who Lyra was before she was with Gregorius and it made me realize just how much shes changed and grown. I love all the obstacles you put in their was, all the creatures they had to face, they were all so real and had great backgrounds to them. All the people they've met, they were realistic, those relationships they had were well written. This story was, really really good. I can't wait to see how you'll change it, I know I'll fall in love with it all over again. And I can't wait to see your next story. <3
Man! I love this story <33 I liked the way it ended...everything about it! I hope you do get it published I'll be rooting for you all the way! And hopefully in the near furture I'll see it on my nearest book store's shelf...and I'll definitely buy it! (:
This story was absolutely amazing. You did such a good job putting it together and I can't until its a book so i can buy it and tell everyone all about it!!
Ah, it's over! I can't believe it! I am so happy that I happened to stumble upon this story and I'm kind of sad that it ended. I'm glad though that it ended on a happy note. =) Well, good luck with editing and publishing! And I hope one day I can read this story (and all your other stories that I've also started reading and am loving so far) on a hard copy and being sold. Because I would definitely pay for a hard copy of all of your stories. =)
I loved the ending, but i particually like the idea of her being a sylph with her weaver, that would certainly be cool, i wish I knew the other endings, thank you for the happy ending though:)