The Weaver's Source - Comments

Really don't want this story to end! And once it does, I sure hope it is a happy ending!

I want a personal sylph to right around on. Like right now. Think they sell them on Amazon? I bet they do.

I'm sad that this story is ending, but also extremely excited to see how it ends at the same time. And a little scared too.

I have this very bad feeling she will die for him

I hope she can save him. So sad this story is coming to an end

Oh! That hurt so much. Why? Why would you do this to us? I'm going to have to take some time to recover from just that last scene. I don't know how I will be able to handle this story ending.

Ah shit. :(( I don't even know what to say except how dare he and how cute is that hahah. I wish you'd update this soon so I know everything turns out okay and everyone lives happily ever after.

I have become so emotionally invested in this story that I'm sad that it's ending. =(
And that last update; you're tugging at my heart strings with what Grigore did. D=

This is soooo good...
Always waiting not so patiently for you to post another chapter.
I just want to hit Grigore in the face right now... although I do understand why he did it.
Lyra should hit him.. and then kiss

OHMYGOSH WHAT!?
Why Grigore!?!? WHYYYYYY
As soon as Lyra wakes up she needs to be raging. Then use that rage to help Grigore fight Sorin.
Seriously though Grigore, WHY.

AHHHH! Too many feels going on right now. I'm so excited to be so close to the ending, but - but then it's the end T-T I'm so angry with Grigore right now, I can't even... Ugh. I really hope Lyra wakes up and goes to the rescue! But really, leaving us with this cliff hanger is so cruel & I love it at the same time. Too many feels.

He better make it out of this fight alive

Oh, no. Not now. Not too soon.

WHY GRIGORE WHY

oh my god noooooo!

Third person is a great idea! I'd love to know what Grigore is up to when he leaves Lyra all alone.

The third person point of view seems like a great idea, but I hope you don't leave behind a lot of the feelings that you convey with the first person. I like this version very much, but a newer one seems like it would be a piece of art as well.

The end of this latest chapter gave me goose bumps all over. You are an amazing writer :)thank you for sharing this beautiful story.

Dawww, Lilith. I've missed her.

I think it would be interesting to see more of what Grigore does when he wanders off on his own if you put the story in third person. I think seeing more of what Grigore does will help me understand the magic and wards better too. I feel like I just don't know much about the extent of his powers and exactly what wards do. I think putting it in third person and showing more of Grigore when he's weaving will help with that and make such a major part of the story a lot clearer to the reader.

Lilith! I miss her.

I think it would be wonderful if the story were in third point of view. I'm glad with whatever your choice will be. You've got the plot which is like the meat of the story well thought of!

I really hope this story gets published, this has that oomph feeling to it.

I agree that a 3rd person viewpoint will fill in a lot of blanks but I would prefer it if you wrote in Grigore's view and switch from Lyra to Grigore on alternate chapters. I would love to read it from his point of view. But it would be a lot of work re-writing this story but I agree... If you want to send this to a publisher, you really need to tidy it up and write it in a more novel-like format. I think the end product is gonna be a masterpiece! I have been enjoying this story so much.. can't wait when you finally make it more into a novel format. Whatever you decide to do, I wish you all the best!

I love the story the way it is but I do see the positive points of writing in 3rd person especially when you want to get it published. This story could be an amazing success. Can't wait for the next update, especially the fight between grigore nd sorin