The Weaver's Source - Comments

Amazing! As always. =D I think this story would be phenomenal in third person. It would definitely add more depth to the story, and a little more action. Brilliant either way!! Cannot wait for the next chapter.

OH MY GOD LILITH IS BACK And she's an awesome wood-snow-like-deer-thingy too! I'm so happy! You should definitely draw this creature, I'd love to see it on paper! And oh wow, I have to say Sorin is not what I expected at all (in a good way). Obviously he's more cunning and evil than I had first thought -the whole dead people incident is one of the most horrifying things I've read in a while- but I LOVE how you made him be this messed up individual who is completely unable to face the consequences of his actions and blames everything on others instead. It's a whole new level on the evil scale ::xD: And it turns out Nanny Rutt had a kind heart after all, although she is a witch with cannibalistic tendencies, but why am I surprised? You never go for simple, predictable characters anyway.

My God, Sorin is worse than I had first thought! To kill a whole town and then use their corpses for puppets....It's just sick, not to mention a terrible abuse of his power.

Which makes me wonder if the children are dead too. And what about Emil? He seems to be the only lively one in the town, so what if he's the only one alive and is helping Sorin? Maybe he agreed to help Sorin to save his own life. So if the children are dead too, then them disappearing might just be another illusion to get Grigore and Lyra to stay in the town so that Sorin can reach his end goal. But if they're alive....why would they be disappearing then?

So I guess Sorin wants to kill Lyra and eat her magic to become even more powerful, and then probably kill Grigore to eat his soul too. What a messed up individual.

This story is getting so crazy right now! I love it!

Take ur time but I have to admit you've given us a lot to think about. I should have known Sorin would be involved but never took that into account when he's known for moving around as much as he does. Great chapter

Wow I just read all of the chapters in one day, this is amazing! lol Grigore reminds me so much of my fiance XD I was picturing him the whole time. I remembering reading in an A/N that you wanted to publish, you definitely should. If not through a publishing company, through self-publishing on amazon or something, you'd make a killing.

I think Sorin has cast a ward which makes it seem like everyone in the village is alive, but isn't. It's just a ghost town and a distraction so Grigore doesn't find him as he is forced to be committed to doing this task which has no solution.

I can't wait to figure out all that is going on in that strange little town. Update soon

I believe Nanny Rutt, she certainly didn't seem interested at all in hurting Lyra or anyone in the town. I think it helped that she was very open about her urges to eat people, but was making attempts to stop herself from attacking anyone.

And it's really disturbing that she's saying she hasn't sensed life from Astor for three months, and even stranger that Lyra and Grigore don't sense anything out of the ordinary. I mean, the people are weird and mechanical and emotionless, but they don't sense any magic or anything odd. I'm very curious to see what's going on here.

Nanny Rutt is a very interesting character nd i don't think she had anything to do with the kidnapping. Can't wait to read what comes next

I wonder if Sorin had anything to do with it :/ probably not but I can't see any kind of explanation at the minute....
VERY INTRIGUING!! :D

reading this is almost like reading a published novel

idk if you've mentioned this before but i definitely think you should publish this (i'm still in chapter 61 and it is awesome)

i'm so glad to be one of your readers, i will spread the word of your awesomeness

I have a feeling that this witch won't have anything to do with it. It just seems too simple, too obvious, which I know is not your style.

Besides, Nanny Rutt is a gentle name. With a name like Black Annis, she just can't be anything good.

The dream is very intriguing, can't wait to read more

your writing is amazing as always i'm glad you're doing a bit better

The town quite literally seems to be a ghost town. It's so odd, and I can't wait to see what happens. Keep up the fantastic work, and I hope you feel better!

This is probably my favorite part so far because it just sounds so creepy. :) Happy hundredth chapter!!

Wow, I didn't expect that. I love the mystery and the fact that children are drawing about death. This story is getting spooky and that's what is keeping me hooked to it. I hope you get better soon! (:

awh I hope you feel much better in the upcoming days! (: and This story is getting so creepy! I love it. I'm just wondering if the kids are actually okay O:

Nd hope you feel better

I can't wait to see mystery unfold with this one