City Traffic Puzzle - Comments

Bowtie. This is some awesome shit. Yeah. You can probably guess who I am? hur hur.
I am le nipples to the bowtie. Update asap, it's getting hot. PLEASE PLEASE PLEAAASSSEEEEE ;D

only the 'new' students wear a name tag.

I am glued to this... Ohh they all sound so hot!

Great story love, I cant stopped reading, I had such a flow that I jumped when the song changed :')

Aww, I loved this last chappy; it was so beautiful to see into Ry's mind :3
Oh, and I want more; I'm still hanging on the moment Ryan finds out the rumours :/

Xo

gah very confused but im hooked already!

Yeah, that was a confusing part. But it should all clear itself up later, y'know? Just keep looking at the little details.

Okay... I'm a little confused, now...
I still want more :3
Oh, and, just so you know, every time this story is updated, I start singing Nearly Witches' chorus. Seriously. I haven't shut up all morning xDD

xo

Why do I have the feeling Gabe is not trying to help him, but set him up a trap? Like, giving him the cue cards, and then a teacher searching around for them and Ryan gets caught and... I won't continue.
Good chappy; I want more *-*

xo

Shit; he's avoiding Bren because of the kiss? Is he crazy, or...?
No, seriously; he shouldn't put up a wall to Brendon, he's so cute :3
He's a good student, though; I wish I could be like him! xDD
Uff, I hope he passes the exams :D

xo

Shit. I think I know what that money was for... HOLY SHITE. It can't be; it simply can't :O
I want even more +.+ +.+ +.+
MORE, GIMME MORE, GIMME MORE! [sorry, MCR moment... Getting back to P!ATD]
It was alwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaays yooooooou fallin' for me...... Lalala... I don't even see the connection with this, but okay xDDD

Anyway.
I still want more :3

Xo

AWWWWWW, I want even more, now!
Girl, why you making me fangirl so hard over this? +.+

xo

Me gusta :3
I want more of this *---* Seriously; I'm so curious to know Ryan's reaction when he finds out what Gabe thinks.... Gosh. It scares me a bit, tbh. Anyway.

xo

Oh my goodness. I hope it wasn't Ryan. I bet it was his Dad. O: OHMYGOODESS. You're a niiiice writer. I want more! <3

Thanks for the comments guys!

I'm certainly having fun with possible killer! Ryan as I write.

Shite. Shite. Shite. Shite. I can't really believe it... Ryan murdering someone? IMPOSSIBLE. He wouldn't be able to kill a fucking fly if his life depended on it! :O
Okay, maybe I'm overreacting, but this... this... OH MY GOSH.
Spencer's being stupid; just saying...
I hope this doesn't fuck up things with Brendon... I'm hooked to this; I want more!

xo

Someone's jealous of the new kid!!!!
At least, that's what I think :D
Anyway's; COOL STORY, BRO! No, just kidding; I love this story :3 It's very cute and beautiful, and I can't wait for more :3

xo

I can't wait for these updates, I'm literally bouncing round my room :) <3

I'M EXCITED ALREADY! :D

OHMYGOD I LOVE THIS :D
I can't wait for the rest of the story <3