December 23rd, 2010 at 09:18pm
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My heart nearly threw up out of my chest. XD SO glad you updated!!!December 19th, 2010 at 02:13am
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It's next week!!!! Yay!! And I'm glad I could motivate you :) And thanks for dedicating it to me!!! That made me so happy. No one's ever dedicated anything to me before.
Anyways, to stay on topic, I have a few favorite moments, so I will post them here:
...when he saw the copper headed fool. I died laughing. Such a funny line.
He had come here prepared to lay down the law and get to the bottom of this woman’s mischief. The mental image of Tre coming to lay down the law is everything.
But as soon as she answered the door, he could barely remember why he had come in the first place. A romantic light at the end of the tunnel??
“And this is no excuse or anything, but you didn’t exactly make it easy for me to come to you,” she muttered, putting the coffee cup to her lips. How I love Serenity. I find her so entertaining.
I loooved this chapter. And I loved the ending with Tre bringing the gifts and the kids hugging him. It made me feel warm and fuzzy. And Terrence is growing on me, however I still don't like Blaze. But I'm still Tre and Serenity all the way ;)
Can't wait until your next chapter!! Hopefully it won't take as long to arrive, haha. And you left us with a cliffhanger by telling us there's a cliffhanger coming :PDecember 11th, 2010 at 09:58am -
thank you sooooooooooooooo much!! LOL FINALLY. I loved the new chapter by the way:) cant wait for the next.........hopefully the wait will be shorter than next time? :)December 10th, 2010 at 04:47am
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So next week has finally approached lol. hahaDecember 9th, 2010 at 07:31am
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So... you said "by next week I promise" over a year ago... that's a mighty long week :P
I just finished re-reading the entire story. It still blows my mind. And I can't believe we're left with such a cliff hanger.
I will admit, my hopes for this story ever getting finished are incredibly dim, but... if you do decide to, you'd make a lot of readers incredibly happy :) I know I would hang off every word that you post... so don't think it would go unnoticed and unappreciated. It would be VERY appreciated. You're one of the most talented writers on this site (I can only think of one other as good as you, but she left a long time ago) and I think it'd be great if you finish this story.
Just my thoughts anyways...November 26th, 2010 at 01:49pm -
I just read both storie through for the second time. You should for sure finish it, its sooo good. hahJune 19th, 2010 at 08:04am
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I just caught up on this entire story.
soo I think you need to update so I can finish it :DFebruary 15th, 2010 at 07:41am -
Hey I mss you writing hope you havent given up yet! Miss you!December 9th, 2009 at 04:44am
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Agh! It's been 10 months since the last update! The suspense is killing me! xD Don't give up, girl! Your fan fictions are amazing!July 31st, 2009 at 08:41am
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I wonder how Tre will react, can't wait for moreJuly 11th, 2009 at 07:39pm
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working on it.... bY NEXT WEEK. promise, my beloved readers :)June 10th, 2009 at 07:48am
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I need to know wot happens with Tre, please update soonJune 6th, 2009 at 07:33pm
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Yay!! I;'ll wait for the next update!!May 7th, 2009 at 02:57am
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i feel sooo bad that i havent updated yet. I've been very busy this semester. I havent been writing and I'm not sure when i will next.... so just bare with me. But I WILL be finishing this story, so dont sweat it.April 20th, 2009 at 09:28pm
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hey im dying for an update please update soon coz its been ages since u last updated?April 16th, 2009 at 09:36pm
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x3 I'm not alone! Yesss...- BombingwithBillieJoe:
- Any plans for an update any time soon?
I'm dying to find out what happens with Tre and the twins and the ever so annoying Blaze and Terrence! :shifty
March 10th, 2009 at 10:11pm -
Any plans for an update any time soon?
I'm dying to find out what happens with Tre and the twins and the ever so annoying Blaze and Terrence! :shiftyMarch 10th, 2009 at 08:30pm -
D:February 24th, 2009 at 12:14am
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hey wens the next chapter out lol i want 2 know wot happens with Tre and the twins xxxxxFebruary 13th, 2009 at 11:13pm
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