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  • Make_my_lover_stay

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    yeah... Dont know why, but I was little brain fucked when writing this chapter. It took way too long and didnt even have everything I orginally wanted to include. I guess those ideas will get pumped into the next chapter. Thank you guys for reading.
    July 1st, 2008 at 06:54am
  • LC_01

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    omg finally! ive been waiting..awesome chapter!
    I really want Tre and Seny to @ least hook up again..im not liking Bianca too much.
    July 1st, 2008 at 05:34am
  • Whatserekim

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    Oh damnnnn!
    More soon??
    July 1st, 2008 at 05:14am
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    omg, i cant wait to see what happens with her and tre.
    i love the sequel.
    July 1st, 2008 at 03:39am
  • Eat Tre's Shoe

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    sequel (L)
    love it!
    June 15th, 2008 at 08:40am
  • Kyra

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    When do you think the next chapter will be up?
    June 5th, 2008 at 09:32pm
  • Kyra

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    YAY! did a double take when i saw this had been updated: thought you had forgotten about it! glad you haven't because it's one of the best stories on here :)
    Loved that chapter: but gotta agree with most people, i am a Tre/Seny fan so i'm looking forward to seeing how this plays out! x x x
    Yeah really, I'm starting to make predictions now. x)

    This is exciting! Aggh!
    May 26th, 2008 at 05:58pm
  • The Write Words?

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    YAY! did a double take when i saw this had been updated: thought you had forgotten about it! glad you haven't because it's one of the best stories on here :)
    Loved that chapter: but gotta agree with most people, i am a Tre/Seny fan so i'm looking forward to seeing how this plays out! x x x
    May 26th, 2008 at 12:48pm
  • BombingwithBillieJoe

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    Lmfao, poor Tre! You can tell he's not exactly enjoying the 23424325 venues that they've gone through.

    The most surprising thing about this chapter is those tickets...holy crap! My eyes seriously went all wide. Can't wait for the next chapter! When do you think it'll be up?
    lol, i thought I should end his torture this chapter. As for the next chapter, I honestly have no idea. But it should be sooner than this one b/c I have a lot of ideas for it and am motivated knowing that its going to be awesome.
    An awesome chapter?!?! *le gasp* well all your chapters are awesome, but i'm holding my breath waiting for the drama to come, lol.

    Anyways, I really liked this chapter. It made me feel warm and fuzzy, despite the fact i'm still an avid Tre/Seny fan.
    May 26th, 2008 at 06:13am
  • Make_my_lover_stay

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    Lmfao, poor Tre! You can tell he's not exactly enjoying the 23424325 venues that they've gone through.

    The most surprising thing about this chapter is those tickets...holy crap! My eyes seriously went all wide. Can't wait for the next chapter! When do you think it'll be up?
    lol, i thought I should end his torture this chapter. As for the next chapter, I honestly have no idea. But it should be sooner than this one b/c I have a lot of ideas for it and am motivated knowing that its going to be awesome.
    May 26th, 2008 at 05:37am
  • Kyra

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    Lmfao, poor Tre! You can tell he's not exactly enjoying the 23424325 venues that they've gone through.

    The most surprising thing about this chapter is those tickets...holy crap! My eyes seriously went all wide. Can't wait for the next chapter! When do you think it'll be up?
    May 26th, 2008 at 04:55am
  • Make_my_lover_stay

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    ok...so this chapter wasnt as awesome as I claimed it to be. But as I'm sure if you read, the next one will most certainly be! Thanks everyone for reading
    May 26th, 2008 at 03:01am
  • pastulio

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    i love this story so far. cant wait to read more.
    May 24th, 2008 at 04:39am
  • Kyra

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    Yay!
    May 16th, 2008 at 11:44pm
  • Make_my_lover_stay

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    Thanks! Its 1/2 done, I'll try and have an update by the end of this week.
    May 12th, 2008 at 03:55am
  • xxnxx

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    hey I'm dying to read the next chapter please put it up soon, this stories amazing
    May 10th, 2008 at 09:24am
  • xxnxx

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    i can't wait for the next chapter, please put it up soon
    April 30th, 2008 at 11:55am
  • Make_my_lover_stay

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    Thanks!! the more comments the merrier actually, lol. Well this semester of classes is almost done (this is the last week), so I'll have all the luscious summer to dispense many chapters. But I've only written about a paragraph so far for the next one....so maybe in a couple weeks?...
    April 23rd, 2008 at 07:16am
  • BombingwithBillieJoe

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    I know I commented for this chapter already... but here it goes... again.

    I love it!!! AH!!! and I cannot wait for the next chapter!!! any idea when that will be? seriously, i'm so excited, because i know it will be awesome. just cause you write awesome. so there. but yeah... not that i'm rushing you, cause i know your life is hectic, but just a general ball park figure...
    April 23rd, 2008 at 07:08am
  • Kyra

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    I can see the foreshadowing already, and I'm so excited.

    I still can't get over how you make it so easy for the readers to adapt to the way the couples are without making them completely unrealistic. The way you tell stories is terrific!

    Thanks for the update, this made my day.
    =)
    Good luck with everything going on in college and whatnot.
    April 18th, 2008 at 11:46pm