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  • halfmoonkid

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    This story was amazing. (:
    I'm sad that it's over, but at least there's a sequel. :D
    Now, I'm gonna read the sequel. (:
    September 25th, 2011 at 09:19pm
  • halfmoonkid

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    Awww. Amazing. (:
    September 25th, 2011 at 05:59pm
  • McKenna Haner

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    :) Awwws
    September 25th, 2011 at 05:50pm
  • autumnreneebabii

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    Awwwwwwwwww . :)
    September 25th, 2011 at 05:39pm
  • halfmoonkid

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    loved it. (:
    I'm excited for the baby now!
    Can't wait for more...
    September 24th, 2011 at 10:30pm
  • autumnreneebabii

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    Excited . She having the baby !
    September 24th, 2011 at 01:18am
  • jackbarakat

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    POST THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON. I thought it was gonna be the birth omg I got so excited! I can't wait for the next one. What's gonna happen to Jack and Rayne?!?!
    September 23rd, 2011 at 09:34pm
  • OhSoKristina

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    Zakldjflak I hope you plan to make like a sequel to this!
    September 18th, 2011 at 03:35pm
  • McKenna Haner

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    I love the whole thing.
    Loved the new chapter...
    UPDATE SOON!!!
    September 18th, 2011 at 04:05am
  • halfmoonkid

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    I love this story. I can't wait until the baby is born. (:
    But I'm going to hate when this story is over :/
    Anyways, can't wait for more! :D
    September 18th, 2011 at 03:21am
  • autumnreneebabii

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    I love how Alex and Zack treats Rayne . So sweet .(:
    September 15th, 2011 at 11:38pm
  • halfmoonkid

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    Loved it!! I hate Jack, he's a jerk...in the story..haha. (:
    More soon??
    September 15th, 2011 at 10:08pm
  • McKenna Haner

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    *gets out the invisible murdering weapon I will not name* Jack Barakat Must Die.

    [just not in real life.]
    September 3rd, 2011 at 01:47am
  • j'adore.

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    Twitch

    I WILL KILL JACK!
    August 29th, 2011 at 01:19am
  • halfmoonkid

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    I hate Jack, but I love this chapter..Please post more soon??
    August 28th, 2011 at 08:57pm
  • misery_writer925

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    Jack is being a douche
    August 28th, 2011 at 08:51pm
  • galassia.

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    I legit started reading this and finished it as soon as I started. I'm hooked, update soon for me<3
    August 26th, 2011 at 09:40pm
  • autumnreneebabii

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    Just started reading this story . I'm looking forward to more .(:
    August 22nd, 2011 at 06:29am
  • halfmoonkid

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    This chapter was good. (:
    At least you have until next Thursday before school starts, my school started last Thursday and I already hate it. :p haha
    More soon?
    August 21st, 2011 at 07:44pm
  • CiaraLouiseElizabeth

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    Oh alex, you sassy bitch you. Not realising i was behind
    Hawhawhaw.

    Shit has certainly hit the fan. And now alex is not in the house anymore.
    I blame jack, his fault he left.
    Now sexy boy is gone.

    Updateeeee
    August 14th, 2011 at 12:24pm
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