Under A Paper Moon. - Comments

This was good:)
Update soon?? Please?? :D

I've always had this Alex bias.

Upppdaaateeee soon pleaseee!

I loved this chapter!! haha (:
Update soon?

This chapter was like reallyyy good :)
Update soon, please?? :D

Awwwh, I'm really sorry about your family member :(
Anyways that bitch Ursela better stay away from Jack or I'm gonna have to come into the story myself and punch her in the jaw, kaay?
And I love Zack in this chapter<333
Update!!!

Looooveeee! Lol, i clicked on your facebook and youre pretty, no homo lol.

I love this story:D
Poor Rayne.. I really hate Ursela. =/
More soon?

I love this story! :D All Time Low is amazing<333 Keep up the amazing writing!

Update like NOOOOW pwetty pwease!

That's soo sad :(
Poor Rayne feels so guilty, but at least she has the other baby!
<3 Jacks sleep-twitching ^-^

Awhhhh:/ sadness! Please tell me she'll get repregnant! Haha

I loved it (:
Aww, there was twins :( well at least one lived
Update soon, PLEASE?!?!

GAH!!! Update it gurl! I wanna know what happens to the baby! O.O Oh and btw I love Raynes outfit

if you dont make the baby okay i'll stop reading i swear :P

OMG!!! WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!(:

oh my god, i completely loved this chapter (:
if that baby isn't ok, then i will hurt you, just saying...haha just kidding, but i will probably cry =/
anyways.....update soon?!?!?! i need to find out what happens now (:

Absolutly love this story.Update soon?Pretty please?

Awwhhzz Rayne and Jack are sooo cute together!! And Raynes new hairs amazing. Update<333

i love you sooooo much for updating(:
this story is like super super amazing!!
more soon, pleeeaseee?!