July 11th, 2011 at 01:02am
Under A Paper Moon. - Comments
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With every chapter you write, I'm getting a little more pregnant (with happiness).July 10th, 2011 at 10:08pm
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With every chapter you write, I'm getting a little more pregnant (with happiness).July 10th, 2011 at 10:08pm
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OMFG Jacks comment to that bitch Ursela was hilarious, like no kidding I couldn't stop laughing! XD And the story is sooooo good. I'm subscribing(; more more moreJuly 8th, 2011 at 01:45am
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well i hadn't had internet for the past 2 weeks so i just now got to read the last 3 chapters you wrote....and i completely loved them(:
i can't wait for more, so please update soon?!July 7th, 2011 at 04:24am -
Like it, please look at your grammar a little bit closer. Update soon!July 6th, 2011 at 05:41pm
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:OOOOOOOOOOOJuly 6th, 2011 at 06:14am
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I love how Jack got so excited! I'm sure it will help Rayne with her nerves :)
Looking forward to the next chapter <3July 5th, 2011 at 07:14pm -
Update. Now. Please. :------)July 4th, 2011 at 07:15pm
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:D It's amazing so far write more please!July 3rd, 2011 at 10:55pm
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i love this. omg.July 3rd, 2011 at 06:09pm
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This is so good akldjakdsjadkfk
Just be sure to proof-read and double check your grammar. I make a lot of mistakes too, but you have to be sure to double check before you post! If you need any help editing, just let me know.
But you're a great writer and I love the plot. I can't wait for more. xJuly 3rd, 2011 at 07:29am -
I think you're a great writer!!
They're times where I don't think I'm the best writer either, but the comments I get on my story reassure me that I am :)
You just have to be confident in yourself.
And I loved this chapter!
I'm glad Jack is deciding to stick by her side. I'm hoping that doesn't change.
Can't wait for the next update!
<3 KelseyJuly 3rd, 2011 at 04:03am -
This is so awesome!
I just started reading it!
I can't wait to find out what happens next :D
Please update soon!!July 2nd, 2011 at 12:29am -
p.s thanx for mentioning me in author's noteJune 30th, 2011 at 01:14am
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OMG YOU MUST UPDATE
i need to know what happens.
Love it! :)June 30th, 2011 at 01:13am -
omg...i NEED to know what happens now....poor jack:(
update soon please!!!June 29th, 2011 at 04:24pm -
Oh My GOD!!!! Poor Jacky :(June 28th, 2011 at 10:13pm
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Omg. This is amazing!! :DJune 28th, 2011 at 08:57am
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YAY!!!! Keep updating please i want to see what happens :P and thank you for adding my name in the authors note :3June 27th, 2011 at 09:31pm
ursela is seriously getting on my nerves:/ lmao
can't wait for more(: