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  • Cardboardheart

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    I love this sotry, please continue.
    August 14th, 2011 at 12:06pm
  • Mr. Darcy

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    Oh wow....I don't know what to type.
    Even though you didn't describe the fight between him and his father to the T, it was still so fucking intense. I was literally here biting my skin throughout it.
    It's well interesting about the fact that they're marrying each other even though they don't love each other, and that he was the one who thought of it, not her. Quite interesting.
    And my conclusion is: your vampires are so much better than Meyer's are. x)
    August 5th, 2011 at 08:22pm
  • totallymcraddicted

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    Guys, Laura went to visit her aunt, so she won't be able to update for a while.
    Please be understanding <3
    August 1st, 2011 at 01:34am
  • totallymcraddicted

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    sorry for the mistakes I'm kinda sleepy...
    July 28th, 2011 at 04:20am
  • totallymcraddicted

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    I liked the chapter, no matter what you say :) I think you described everything perfectly and actually I'm glad you didn't writr the Lisette-Nicky sex scene cause it would have been awkward...
    I love you wifey <3
    Hope your aunt gets better, I send my love and support for you, her your mom and the rest of the family
    If you need to talk just message me here, on msn or on facebook, I'll do my best to listen and cheer you up.
    July 28th, 2011 at 04:19am
  • beautifully_demented

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    tell your aunt i said get well soon
    July 28th, 2011 at 04:04am
  • angy_something

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    I loved it love. It was amazing I loved how you explained a bit of the wedding shit and ceremonies.
    Love ya
    Ps. I you need to talk just message me love. I send my best wishes to you, your mom and auntie.
    July 28th, 2011 at 12:19am
  • beautifully_demented

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    love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 22nd, 2011 at 04:53am
  • totallymcraddicted

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    :D
    awesome. =D
    well, you made my day.
    *sends love*
    July 22nd, 2011 at 01:27am
  • angy_something

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    It was amazing. It demonstrates that age doesn't matter when you love something. I loved it. I can see that Mal and Ara are gonna get along just perfect.
    Its amazing that Ali has met Paul. ;)
    Love ya
    July 21st, 2011 at 10:02pm
  • beautifully_demented

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    i love this story!
    July 15th, 2011 at 06:12pm
  • angy_something

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    WoW. You can totally see that Nicky is gay. Because no man plans his wedding. LoL. Jk Jk
    I loved the end where Emmy was playing with little children. It was cute.
    Love ya
    Ps. Congrats on the wifey. I'm very sad that I didn't get invited to the wedding. :,(
    PPs. I think that you should write a frikey. There aren't many of them here. If you do write one pleeeeeease send me the link. ;)
    July 15th, 2011 at 09:09am
  • totallymcraddicted

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    so....
    1- great chapter, no matter what you say. I'm looking forward to the wedding and ceremonie(s)! xD
    2-oh I love you too my incredible wifey :')
    3-woo Frikey!!!!!!! Please write it, it'll be awesome!
    4-its 3am and I'm really tired so I'm gonna sleep now xD
    July 15th, 2011 at 09:07am
  • totallymcraddicted

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    xD
    LOL at the end
    update, update!!!
    July 14th, 2011 at 07:13pm
  • angy_something

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    I looooved it. Poor Liss at least she knocked and didn't get scarred for life. LoL
    Mhhh Maybe instead of Nicky having sexxx with her maybe Greg can. Mhh that's actually a good idea. ;)
    Love ya
    July 14th, 2011 at 06:08pm
  • angy_something

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    Ohhh sexxxy time. I loooved it.
    Love ya
    Ps. I'm sooo sorry for getting lost but I was very busy this weekend and now it's gonna be even worse buuut I'll try anything I can to read.
    July 12th, 2011 at 07:35am
  • totallymcraddicted

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    xD
    lil sexy time never hurts ;)
    that was haaaawt, and I'm glad Nicky baby's healing fast ^^
    love ya, love the story
    <3
    July 10th, 2011 at 04:38pm
  • beautifully_demented

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    i feel special!!!!!!!
    July 10th, 2011 at 12:22pm
  • angy_something

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    Vampires. Werewolves. Love. Plans. Fightin. Brothers. Pain. B-Days. Parties. Engagements
    Ok nooooow back to the chappy. Nicki is very fucked up buuuuut I'm glad he's gonna heal very fast.
    Love ya
    July 9th, 2011 at 03:46am
  • beautifully_demented

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    that chapter made me cry.
    July 8th, 2011 at 11:59pm