Hold My Heart Captive - Comments

Oh. Snap. That's insane! I mean, I knew he liked her......but dang! This is gonna be interesting.

Is this story already finished?? :(( more please!!

awww that was so cute.

I love this story alot. Haha I love how u made Johnny so annoying in this story. More please

awww so romantic... and a good inside into why brian wanted her

never mind. i guess New York is different : )

loving the story so far. can't wait to read more. you might want to double check on the age thing, though. at least where i live foster homes stop when they turn 18.

Love the updates hehehe yay

Awh. Don't tell me Brian liked Lydia too! That would suck. =/ On a happy note, I'm glad everyone's okay! Can't wait for the next update. (:

<333 Up-date again soon! =)

Uh oh, I sense something bad coming now. Anyways, if you ever need a layout to for your story, I wouldn't mind making you one :3

Ahh now she love Zack so cute. I'm glad everybody was okay.

Wow i want to know what happens i hope that you can update this again soon .

I hope its not what I think. Why would her 'parents' want her back so they can just continue abusing and raping her? And Brian does care for her he does want to help her. I cant for more please please please update very soon!

yay!!! why does brian hate her so much?? you should do an inside on her parents and brian. it would be nice so we can see what they think

I love your story! Such an awsome twist on an idea thats been overly used on this site..... And many others

Love the story, up-date again soon! =)

I really like this story. It is very well written and I like the plot and characters. I wonder why Brian hates Lydia so much what does he have against her? I cant wait for more update soon!

yay excelent chapter please add more... its my new addiction

i love this story. keep it up and i think it will turn out awsome. im going to add u so i can keep reading it.