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  • Taylor25

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    Haha this chapter is hilarious! I can't wait to see Jordan and her at the game! Great work! Update soon! :)
    July 29th, 2011 at 11:45pm
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    Ha I love them! Seriously! I started reading your other stuff and immediately subscribed. Can't wait until you update either story. As for the Sid fic. Well, based on your other writings it's going to be good.

    I also can't wait to see the outcome of Jordan's win.

    Update soon! I haven't had to go through the corn fields...yet
    July 29th, 2011 at 07:35pm
  • JordysShorty

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    Love how Anna got Jordan back at the end! hahahaha
    July 29th, 2011 at 06:17pm
  • Cupcake1

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    So happy this is starting!! And I love how competitive they both are
    July 29th, 2011 at 05:23pm
  • reneeanne

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    haha I love Anna. :) So excited this started!
    July 29th, 2011 at 05:10pm
  • Dallas.

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    Love it! I can't wait to read the follow up of the shootout during intermission...maybe Flower will give her some tips- including tips on creative chirping techniques? Looking forward to more!
    July 29th, 2011 at 05:09pm
  • JillNotJillian

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    Oh God I loved that chapter! I feel really bad for Anna though having to go out infrontvof everyone. It'd be hilarious if she magically blocked all of his shoots haha that would be priceless. Can't wait for more! Keep up the incredible work!!!
    July 29th, 2011 at 04:49pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    ahhhhhh i loved the first chapter!!!
    the bet sounded like fun! hahaha lets see how she does in front of the net x)
    i cant wait for more!
    July 29th, 2011 at 04:46pm
  • millertime

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    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

    Loved it. Loved that she managed to get a dig in despite losing (and oh dear, a shoot out?! Poor girl! Flower should give her some training!) Great start and I am glad to see the characters back. I missed them!
    July 29th, 2011 at 03:20pm
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    I loved this chapter! I think it is hilarious how they had a show-down! I just wish she would've won because that would have been priceless, but I think that her in the net is going to be hilarious!
    July 29th, 2011 at 01:03pm
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    totes just realized i hella like adv. my story on your superior story...wooopppss(: lol typical me! so sorry! hahahaha
    but im so happy to see anna/jordan back! (: eeeee totally makes my day! please update
    July 29th, 2011 at 11:30am
  • Cupcake1

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    Seriously pschyed for this story! Can't wait!!!!!!!
    July 29th, 2011 at 05:48am
  • emmared FMT!

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    I re-read this, and got myself RE-excited all over again!!!!!

    Sorry I'm Staaling.. Wait, stalling * ;)

    I can't wait for you to post that, and i MOST DEFINITELY love your characters.. I mean, 'Sid the Kid', girl, you have me at Si... because no one would know who you were talking about after only an S, but Si... get it?

    Of course you don't... I CAN'T WAIT!!!! <3
    July 26th, 2011 at 02:36am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    i already said it once but i'll say it again....
    I can't wait for this!!!!!
    July 25th, 2011 at 01:39am
  • millertime

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    Okay so now I wait.

    I don't mind waiting...but you know I am excited for the future adventures of Jordan, Anna and Gronk!
    July 25th, 2011 at 01:19am
  • abyssopelagic;

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    AHHHH IM SO ESSITEDDD
    July 25th, 2011 at 12:46am
  • Twigs15

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    GAHHH SO EXCITED!!!!! when is it gonna start? :)
    July 24th, 2011 at 08:31pm
  • taylorm246

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    i'm really exicted for this story! I fell in love with the girl next door and hoping i can do the same with this one. :D

    P.S your an awesome story writter
    July 18th, 2011 at 05:39am
  • heatherxdee

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    Can't wait!
    July 15th, 2011 at 10:09pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    can't wait for this!!
    July 15th, 2011 at 07:32am
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