Okay so I just read all the chapters and oh my god. You are seriously an amazing writer and the story is very unique and i love it. and it sucks that it's ending )':
This chapter was amazing!! And nooo I don't want it to end yet :( There's so much to elaborate on! And my AP test killed me too, I'm just hoping I got at least a 3 on it - Same for you of course, but you're such a good writer so your essays will definitely boost your scores!! Can't wait to see what happens next; update soon please!!
Oh God. This was such a great chapter then Jack went and ruined everything. I feel so bad! Honestly Mary shouldn't let it get to her - Jack realized he just had to give her a chance! I wish I was offered an opportunity to be a merch girl though xD And omg my mom said Jack-a-lope today and I thought of this story, it was great! Can't wait for the next update :D
I haven't read this story fully yet, but I was looking at your Author's Note and saw that you liked Set It Off and I HAD to comment. Your story's great and you have an awesome music taste.
Jack my be a goof but that doesn't mean he isn't smart. Her lying is very obvious. Rian came to Kara's rescue, she'll probably get an earfull from Jack later
Ahhhhh I'm reading this in school and i didn't realised it wasn't finished and it's amazing and perfect and you really need to update ;_; It's so good!!