Aww this was a great chapter! I'm so happy jack finally noticing the little odd things that Mary can't hide. Watch her say it's her middle name but then she gets caught in a lie omg that would really mess things up. I just really want jack to find out and help her get out of this situation! I can't wait for the next update :)
This is absolutely amazing. Jack's family is so sweet! I hope she opens up to Jack soon, he would be so concerned and caring about everything, and he and his family could get her out of that mess.
Can't believe I missed all these chapters being posted! I have to check my emails more often :/ but these updates were fantastic and I can't wait to see Mary's excuse this time :/ Keep it up! :)
THIS IS SUCH A CLIFF HANGER! ... the second time too xD you are literally killing me so can you purdy please post another chapter? (at least I asked nicely)
Ugh my comment got deleted too? Gahh this is so annoying xD But great update I can't wait to see what Jack does. I reallly hope Mary tells him the truth because things can't go on like this. Someone has to find out and get her away from her dad!!! Please update soon?