Fair Territory - Comments

oh dear lord, and update, yeaaaaaah :)
it does not suck, this is a great chapter. Thank you so much for posting something. I really like what you did here.

Boo, Brendon, I love him, but he needs to chill out. Thank god Alex is forcing Jack to finally get his head on straight. Aww, I kinda feel bad for Jack though.

I can't wait for the next update, this story is epic :)

Ahh, it's back! I'm so excited!
Gah, why do you have to be such an oblivious (and occasional asshole) guy, Jack? :c

ahhhhhh an update!
Yay!
Gah, Jack is such an ass :( And I'm sad about Martin and John :( and I hope this can all work out!
Loving that you're back on with this :)

Omfg. I got really confused when I got the email about this updating. But then I remembered and I read it all again, and its still freakin lovely and perfect and I just, gah! I hope you keep up with this because I fell in love with it all over again. :)

omfg please tell me you plan to update this, this is the best sports AU fic I have ever read, please continue :(

This story is the most beautiful creation ever.

Update soon please? :D

I read this whole thing and i love it a whole lot. <3
That being said, I'm not to fond of Jack in this story. He seems like a major douche but he and Alex are cute. I feel bad for John too. He deserves the position of captain more than Jack does. Sorry, but I do.
My heart aches for Martin. I felt so bad for him. </3 He didn't deserve that.
I kinda want more of Flyzik and Grieco too. Hehe :3

OMG this is amazing <3 i feel bad for martin =( keep it up (Y)

But it is still good. Poor Martin :( And Grieco, and ugh. I'm happy for Alex and Jack, but I want more Flyzik/Grieco lol. I'm sorry I'm being selfish :)

AW AW AW that was so cute. They told each other they loved each other!!!! YAY!
Poor Martin. Pete can't do this to him! NO!

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oh my god it's so perfect!!!!!
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i adore jalex so much
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Poor Martin :'(
He just can't get a break.
And I kinda wanna murder Pete in this story...
Thanks for updating <3

Martin! Poor thing! D:
Why is Wentz such a dick!?!?!
And Alex, and Jack! :D

-kayt

nhn.
PETE! NO!
My gosh, so much drama!
Poor John. Poor Martin.
Kinda not feeling so nice about Jack right now.
But I loved the update!
can't wait for more =]

Great chapter :D can't wait to read what you have in store for the story :D

Love this, especially the Zack/Martin-ness. Update soon!

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ohmagaaad this is so good! you HAVE to continue updating :D

I love how you write multi pairing fics cos you give the right amount of attention to each couple. I just want to squish Jalex and give Grieco a slap for being so dumb.

Cant wait for more :D

p.s. that sex scene was hot!