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  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    Loved the chapter.
    While Jack and Alex are trying to be something, Martin and Zack's something is falling apart and then there's Grieco and Flyzik!! :D Just so great!

    -kayt
    July 24th, 2011 at 04:06pm
  • Tongue Tied Ideas.

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    Reina, I'm just on the first Chapter and I'm dying already!
    hasldasjdl This is just awesome as all of your works are. <3
    July 24th, 2011 at 03:39pm
  • No Tomorrow

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    nhn.
    So much to say about this chapter!
    Jack apologising to Alex AND wanting to go to his game?
    GRIECO AND FLYZIK! FINALLY!
    Oh Martin and Zack :( hopefully they'll make up soon :(
    And Brendon and Ryan!! Why do parents have to be involved :(

    Loved the update!
    can't wait for the next =]
    July 24th, 2011 at 01:32pm
  • paintingflowers-

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    Update soon!! Ive missed your fics!
    July 24th, 2011 at 08:10am
  • BandShirtwithaskateb

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    This is possibly the most attractive baseball team ever!
    July 24th, 2011 at 08:06am
  • TheKayHoe

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    Jsjwoeiciakksllakfgjklsjag.
    OHMAHGOD. love x3
    Please continueeee :)
    July 12th, 2011 at 07:36pm
  • jonas'toohtsiepop

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    I love this story! I like stories that have more than one relationship going on.…(even if I do get a little confused at times)

    Can't wait for the next update. :)
    July 12th, 2011 at 05:23am
  • No Tomorrow

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    hooked! So so hooked!
    This is so good already =]
    can't wait for the next chapter!
    July 7th, 2011 at 10:56pm
  • n.oxious

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    ndjwirjfjvjdjakxjgeifjajjrur
    NOOO
    THEY CAN'T BE FIGHTING
    MARTIN
    YOU HAVE TO BAAHHLEEEEEEVEEEE IN ZACK
    AND JACK
    I AM GOING TO KICK YOUR NUTS IN
    YOU SCARED POOR ALEX!!
    I squealed when Ryan asked Brendon to move in hehe <3 adorables
    I love this story so much!!
    I can't wait for more
    July 7th, 2011 at 07:15pm
  • i more than mean it.

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    Love it(: Poor Martin and Zack, hopefully they can work past this. I doubt it was on purpose, like someone above me said as well, but if it was.. I'm a little scared for Zack's safety.
    July 7th, 2011 at 04:46pm
  • Tattoo

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    Thanks so much for updating :D
    <3
    July 7th, 2011 at 04:39pm
  • kissandsell;

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    i love it i love it i love it i love it, this is one of my favourites and you're only on chapter 2! hajfsk <3
    July 7th, 2011 at 09:46am
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    I really don't know what it is about musicians as baseball players that intrigues me so much.
    I love this story, however, whatever the reason is. :)

    -kayt
    July 7th, 2011 at 07:30am
  • kprasek

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    Fjfjgusksjcud I love this!!!!
    I can't wait for jalex to happen
    July 7th, 2011 at 07:03am
  • prettyxinxyourxpain

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    Gosh, so great. I don't think Zack had anything to do with Gabe getting hit, but if he did... martin will not be happy. Temperamental Jack is kinda hot... hmm....
    July 7th, 2011 at 05:56am
  • kyleburns

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    I love it. I love the outburst from Jack and then from Martin. Can't wait for more :)
    July 7th, 2011 at 05:51am
  • xxxbreelynn

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    Update. :):)
    July 6th, 2011 at 08:44pm
  • mamihlapinatapai

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    this story is so adorable and the all the pairings i like

    please continue!(:
    July 6th, 2011 at 05:00pm
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    I love this already. :D
    I mean, really.
    Such an extraordinary concept.
    Can't wait for more.

    -kayt
    July 6th, 2011 at 12:40am
  • Tattoo

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    I really like this so far!
    You should definitely continue this!
    It's such a unique story line :)
    Update soon please? <3
    July 5th, 2011 at 07:29pm
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