Fair Territory - Comments

OH GOD. Can they just be okay? Seriously I can't take it Martin hurting like that. Stop being so butt hurt ZACK! Dammit. Apart from them all is well, but I'm scared about their manager, Grieco and Matt are just too cute.

-rant-

I've been waiting for like FOREVER! But I understand. :')
And condolence about your uncle.

Awh, I'm so sorry for your loss<3
It's understandable why you haven't updated recently.
But this... this is perfect.
Oh my god, I love it.

You are god.

Ugh, I absolutely loved this! <3
I'm glad you updated and I'm sorry about what happened :(
This is lovely and I love Ryan and Brendon so much omg <3

so glad that you updated :)
seriously, this story is great .. even beyond that

I love this so much. Cannot wait to see what happens next!

<i>“But you’re Jack Barakat. You’re cooler than Alex is.”</i>
My favorite part of this chapter omg. I laughed a lot. But anyway, this is great, as usual, and I can't wait to read more!

I'm really sorry to hear your uncle passed away :(
Thanks for updating <3
Hopefully Martin didn't screw up too bad.

I'm such a fan of Zack/Martin. Idk why... but love the update. Can't wait for more!

Awwwww, Jack and Alex!
And Martin worrying about Zack!
:D
Wonder what's wrong with Squire.
O.o
Update soon!

-kayt

Reina! I loved the update! flyzik and grieco are my favesies right now :)

this is another one of your amazing fic's!! I love how it goes between everyone!! Can't wait for an update! <3

I love how it goes back and forth between each player, it really keeps my attention so I don't miss anything.

I seriously love this story. great update :)

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Okay, so I'm not much of a baseball fan, but I do love this. And I keep thinking about Jack going to Alex's game and I'm picturing Alex either choking or blowing Jack away with his mad baseball skills.
Love this. But, as always, I love anything you write.

Jalex = adorbs. I love stories that involve lots of little sub plots and I love how you have something different going on with every couple

cant wait for more :D

Awww.
I am utterly and absolutely in love with this story <3
Thanks for updating!

Aww Brendon asdlkfh

aaaaaahhhhh, Jack and Alex, haha ajgsdjalks but my reaction. That's a given.
MATT and GRIECO!!! Oh my God, they'll be the death of me,. aksbjda xD Seriously I didn't know that I would ship them this hard.
Martin and Zack, awww, babies.. :( Hope it will be okay soon.
And Brendon!!! haha wanting to get a dog and want to name it something Ryan won't like, it's just haha xD
So you can just say how much I like this Chapter. :D

Chapter 2

Oh my God. What?! Damn, I don't know what to feel, I feel bad for Jack, aww poor baby, we have the same problem. And Martin? What the hell? That's definitely the problem with dating someone from the opposing team.