I'll Be There - Comments

Love love love this! update soon, cant wait for the fallout from this chapter!

so this chapter makes me want to read a jon and ava in the future story...

awwwww no :[

“Hey Ava!” Jordan boomed as he entered the locker room. “You playing tonight?”
epp!!! idk why but i think that is so cute!

Ava moved wordlessly as she brought her camera up to her eye and snapped a photo of Dan, the flash making him flinch a bit as Geno smiled sheepishly.
that is so awkward but so hilarious at the same time

She was torn – she didn’t want to kiss Geno, but she wanted the Penguins to win.
SIGHHHHHH. kid. he's being so nice to you. and you don't deserve it.

Rachel took off after Ava, also having seen her ex-husband on the big screen with his new wife.
OHHHHHHH FUCK. that bastard. if only she wasn't so innocent and knew what an asshole her dad was

(i just laughed when i saw it was another halloween thing. god, what is with you and halloween.)

“If you kiss me, I’ll hit you.” She countered, making Mario cough loudly to cover up a laugh. “And I like it too.” She added softly, placing her hands on her knees.
come on, he's a staal.. which means he has game :p phoebe, look at your spawn working the ladies :p

“You need someone to protect you,” He began indignantly, “until I’m big enough to do it.” He finished.
I JUST DIED LAUGHING! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! this kid has some serous moves :p

“If you’re never stern with her, she’ll always be a little brat, Rachel. She gets away with everything and she never has any consequences.”
TRUTH.

“Yeah well guess what, I don’t want to be your Dad, either.” Geno snarled, making big, crocodile tears fall from Ava’s eyes as she ran from the house.
well.. that's not true…

well that didn't end well…….
i wonder how rachel is going to react to that. I mean that was mean, but she kinda brings out the worst in people cause she's a brat.
im interested to see where they go from here…
more soon???
gracias :)

Jonathan Staal reminds me soooo much of his father lol...can't wait for more

So happy that you updated this! Not a happy way to end the chapter, but I trust you will make things better!

"Ava moved wordlessly as she brought her camera up to her eye and snapped a photo of Dan, the flash making him flinch a bit as Geno smiled sheepishly." Ohmygoshh peeeeing. Sooo funnny!

i cant believe the ending.
jon was so cute
ava was a brat
and geno was grrr.
moree please<3
good luck with school!

Uh oh maybe something will happen like what jonathan said and Geno will protect her. Idk. I hope they make up though.

I'm glad Geno finally said something, Ava's a little brat, hahah!

:)

oh my lord!!!
SO glad you updated!!
Where to begin! ahhh things were going so well at the beginning of this chapter!
I really wanna know what Rachel told Ava about her dad.... i mean she did run off to try and find him.
Jonathan Staal is the most adorable little flirt! hahaha i want him and Ava to have their own story... lol
Okay i agree with Geno, Rachel has got to keep her girl in line. I know no one wants to be the bad mom but Ava was turning into a little brat. I guess Geno was a bit harsh with his comment, not only towards Ava but also for Rachel. I mean how do you thin she felt when she heard him say that!
I can not wait to see what happens in the next update!!!

I'm thinking that even though he doesn't want to, he will separate from Rachel, because he thinks there's no way to fix things or make them better with Ava.

Then I think Ava will see how upset Rachel is without Geno, and will finally want him around.

Or, Geno will be the one to comfort her when she ends up face to face with her father and her rejects her.

Awh man, Geno being a meany pants. Totally understand it though, he's kind of hit his breaking point. Ohmigod though, it was so cute when Jon Staal was like, "You should like Geno so he can protect you until I'm big enough to." So freaking cute!

Keep on, keeping on.

:O That was mean of Geno... I still have a feeling something will happen to Rachel and Geno will have to take care of Ava...

Really enjoying this story, can't wait for more! I'm liking the pace you're setting Ava & Geno's relationship, not rushing into a happy ending. Can't wait to see where you go next!

Great chapter!

This is probably one of the cutest things that I've ever read. Ava is probably one of the biggest brats ever, but I know Geno's growing on her and that she loves him as much as he loves her.
More soon miss!

Cutest story ever! I really hope they get along :)

I'm so glad Ava's finally coming around! And I think Geno should offer to teach her Russian. Drama = Rachel's ex?

aw that is cutee(: i love genoo stories, as i say in EVERY comment, and this one may just be my favorite!

Ugh so stinking cute! Loved it! The last part was absolutely adorable. She should totally start calling Geno dad!!!!!!