July 17th, 2011 at 09:02pm
I'll Be There - Comments
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Great story so far, really enjoying, so cute that Geno is trying to win over the little girl...can't wait for more!July 17th, 2011 at 08:23pm
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This girl has a lotttt of boy drama in her life! Haha a Staal would plant a kiss on her. Loving this<3 hopefully she becomes more accepting of Geno.July 17th, 2011 at 01:58pm
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aww so adorable. can't wait for more!July 17th, 2011 at 11:59am
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I love this story. It is beyond adorable. Please keep it!July 17th, 2011 at 11:15am
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i really, really, really like this story. I like how its a real story. It has substance. I like how this is how life really is. Keep it going. And while I wait for another chapter I might have to read some of your other stories if you have any. :)July 17th, 2011 at 10:10am
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Loving this.July 17th, 2011 at 09:30am
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I only have one thing to say right now. I love John. Yup.
Short and simple.
(I can just tell that his character is going to be interesting. I like how he's impulsive.)July 17th, 2011 at 09:08am -
I think Ava is adorable, and I love how stubborn she's acting round all the boys. Love the story so far, can't wait for the next update.July 17th, 2011 at 09:08am
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don't scrap the story! i think its going in a great direction! really like this story. can't wait for more!July 17th, 2011 at 08:33am
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don't scrap the story! i think its going in a great direction! really like this story. can't wait for more!July 17th, 2011 at 08:33am
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Ava is definitely growing on me. And I think it's adorable and hilarious that she's rejected a Staal boy! She's a tough one. But I like her. :] She doesn't like to take any bullshit. She's won me over.
And I think that as long as Geno doesn't act like a total dork (he's an adorable one though!), he should be making his way into Ava's good graces. Maybe?
Great update!July 17th, 2011 at 08:29am -
Awww so precious. I love thinking of geno trying to win over a little girl. It's just sweet.
5 kids? Phoebe and Jordan? 5 - really? Hush up there Bri. I'm sure we had a blast making them.
The last line is epic - Geno has his work cut out for him.
Dying for chapter two - now would be good.July 16th, 2011 at 04:28am -
Yayayayay<3 genogenogeno<3 i like thisJuly 16th, 2011 at 02:49am
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can't wait to see where this goes! :)July 15th, 2011 at 06:12pm
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I love the idea for this story, cant wait to read more :)July 15th, 2011 at 10:17am
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I really, really like this story so far! I feel like Geno trying to get this kid to like him will just be hilarious. She's so blatant and just so 7 years old! Hahaha seven year olds are nightmares... They think they know everything.
I just love the idea of Geno vs. little seven year old girl. Can't wait for more!! :]July 15th, 2011 at 09:21am -
“Forget about him, yeah?” He asked with a growl to his voice.
not hard to do when someone like that is all up in your space ;)
And sometimes it’s kind of a deal breaker so if you just want to walk away, I totally understand.” She looked rather finicky.
but you'd still kinda be an asshole….
Plus, he was ready to do anything to keep Rachel around.
good man that evgeni malign.. good man :)
Geno was good with kids, kids liked him, so why would Ava be any different?
bahahahaha little does he know ;).. not that I know anything of course… :p
Jordan who had five kids between he and his wife Phoebe.
damn pheebs.. work it gurl. own that body ;)
Sidney was engaged to his long time girlfriend but they both wanted children as soon as possible.
crazy baby lady :) gotta put those girl parts to work.. bahahaha oh gawd. i need to stop.
Maybe she would think it was cool that he played hockey?
I would..
“Hi Ev-geeny.” She said with a sour face. Even with her look of distaste, Geno couldn’t deny how cute she was.
lollololololol. kids these days :p
she gave him an apologetic smile.
she knows her kids a devil.. nice :p
“She doesn’t like me.” Geno frowned, holding her hand again.
I'm glad you knew she was lying to you.. bahahaha
Geno paused for a moment, trying not to panic as he looked across the table at Ava.
LOL it just cracks me up that he is so unnerved by a seven year old girl when he faces such big guys on the ice. but its super presh
“I don’t like you.”
SHUT DOWN. BAHAHAHAHA!
Poor Geno! He just wants to be loved :(
but hey, if he likes her mom enough, he'll do the work.
That little girl seems kinda like a brat, but then again, aren't we all kinda bratty at that age??
this was super cute and I can't wait for more, even though you should have waited :pJuly 15th, 2011 at 07:45am -
Ava needs to get over it. Ur mom is happy.July 15th, 2011 at 07:41am
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Ouuuuuhhh! I'm excited for this one! Can't wait for more and to see where it all goes.
Yay for a Geno story! :)
Keep on, keeping on.July 15th, 2011 at 07:18am
well at least shes getting more used to geno.
lol Jonathan kissing her! so cute!