False Pretenses - Comments

Loved the update!
Aw... so Bam is going to split from Missy! Just after the movie stuff is over and all. Aww... so this means he really cares about Jayde, then. <3



Sorry, I couldn't resist. Dancing Dead., I'll make it up to you by posting two gifs after your next update! :DD *Making mental note
Aha, I love how Jayde told Novak off! Yes! About time someone did. I seriously don't know how Bam puts up with him. :/
Naughtiness at the end of the update. :P lol. Sorry, I'll try not to make this awkward. ;P Hm... but I was kind of sad at Jayde's statement at the end there. Because she was still thinking about the scheme and everything. That's what she's supposed to be doing, but... I just felt more bad for Bam after reading that. *Sigh*... but it's happening, so... yeah. No matter if they go through with it or not, I have a high feeling the guys will still find out, and that won't go over well when they do. :/
Great update, though! Loved it, and can't wait for more! :D

Pretty sure Lyss is falling for Ryan..dammit Bam! Why'd you have to get put in jail & cock block?

Loved the update! :)
Great job with the new chapter. Ooh... so Ryan and Lyss almost took their relationship... to the next level. :o But Bam interrupted.
Nice that he got himself in jail. Nice. But I'll take the positive of the situation and think about how he was fighting Steve-O for Jayde. :) Which is cute next to the stupid part, which was getting arrested for it.
Can't wait for the next update!
And idk... do you guys like the gifs? Neither of you have said anything really. :/ I'll take a break with this comment since I kind of have limited time on here and don't have time to put one in. :/
But I'll keep posting them if you guys like them! :D

The last chapter were simply great! This story is so entertaining, it doesn't bore me AT ALL.
Can't wait for the next chapter :)) I'm so excited what'll happen next. :))

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Loved the update! :)
Hm... so Jayde's tired of trying to win Bam over, huh? She's kind of done with him; now it's up to him and what he chooses to do.
He needs to realize he wants to be with her! But then again... I'll feel bad for him if he does that and then in the end gets his hearbroken. :( Aw...
But this is the look I had on my face when she told Bam off:



Because it's about time somebody did, you know? He just goes around and messes with those girls hearts and thinks he can get away with it. But that was until Jayde came along and told him he can't. :) Which is true.
Although I also saw it a bit like foreshadowing because Jayde is kind of just doing that to him. And she'll end up breaking his heart in the end if her and Lyss continue what they're doing. Or maybe the word I mean is that it's ironic. lol. Either way... you get what I mean. :P
Great update! Aha, can't wait for the next one! :D

I like Jayde..She doesn't let any man, even if he is sexy as fuck like Bam or Steve-O, hold her back or get her, be a straight up whore or get in the way of what she wants.

Aw...



I'm just thinking about how bad that would've been if Dunn walked in while she was kissing Pontius. :( I would've felt bad for him, and still do since like, that happened without him knowing.
But I mean, this is what they're trying to do, for their website and all, so... is it wrong to feel bad while reading this? Idk.
But I still do. :/
Anyway, great update! You're showing that they're still going along with messing with the other ones, even though they're getting attached to Ryan and Bam. Well, Lyss has shown that she can, will Jade do the same? Though I guess she kind of already has with Steve-O a little bit.
Can't wait for more! :D

I have a small feeling that Lyss is starting to fall for Ryan..and is she gonna give him sex?? Jayde's plan to avoid Bam for a day or so isn't gonna work very well if Bam goes over to their apartment, and I have a feeling that he won't leave her alone until they talk.

haha poor Dunn...even Bam thinks it's funny that the girls tested him..& Missy & Bam's "relationship" is completely fucked up. She should actually care that he's fucking around on her, even though she's probably doing the same thing to him.I hope Bam ditches her & goes after Jayde.

Yay, another update!! :D :D
lol. I like that Bam thinks is going along with the testing Dunn thing. That just shows his personality and like, how he messes with Dunn all the time.
I wonder what he'll think when he sees that he's getting messed with too at the end? Or just for the fame of it all? :(
And ah, Missy walked on Jayde and Bam making out! How embarassing. XD

...but the weird part is, she didn't seem to care. Like... what? :o

Hm... they have a weird relationship. Maybe it's because she knows how he is, so... she doesn't see any point in stopping him? :/ Though if I were her, I'd be mad. lol.
Great update, though. It got a bit steamy. ;) lol.
Can't wait for more! :D

Yet again another good chapter, can't wait to read more! (:

Aw... so Ryan really does care for Lyss! :D

So cute! ^That's to show my expression by the way. Closest gif I could find. :P Not a Ryan one, but, don't worry. You haven't seen the last of those. :)
Anyway, great update! I'm glad Jayde helped Lyss out, it just shows how close they are as friends. :) And I'm glad that Ryan stayed cool and didn't like, fall for any of her tricks. I like Jayde, but she's better with Bam Bam. :D
lol. Once again, great update! Can't wait for more! :D

Awww, Ryan really digs Alyssa! I want MORE!!!

Love love love this! (: can't wait for more. I'm hooked

Loved the update! :D
Aha, nice. Jayde is just reeling Bam in even more. She even got him to break up with two of his girlfriends. That's saying something. ;)
Hm... but will he stop seeing Missy? Will he actually... divorce her for Jayde?
I realize I've been lacking on the gifs promise. Or well, I'd say I'd do it until one of you commented back, but I know one of you did, but oh well. I'm still going to put them in comments anyway. To liven things up. :D Here's two since I forgot one in the last comment. :)
A Ryan one for the last update:

^Isn't he just adorable?! :)
And a Bam one for this one:

Aww... :D
lol. Anyway, great update! I LOVE THIS STORY! :D
Can't wait for more! :D

Damn Lyss more than likely has Ryan wrapped tightly around her little finger. & Jayde has Bam in that same position, even though Lyss is moving a lot faster than Jayde, but still. & I hope Ryan isn't playing Lyss, and I really can't picture him doing that.

:o Woah...
So I see Lyss and Ryan's relationship is progressing a lot more than Jayde and Bam's. lol. Like, a lot more.
I don't blame Lyss for still being cautious, though. Although, I can't really picture Ryan playing her. I think he really likes her. He seems like he does, anyway.
Aha, they're so cute! JDKHOFLSGL;IGR! lol. I love them together. :D I thought it was adorable how Ryan got kind of jealous when Pontius was flirting with her, too. He'll definitely be trying to see her again or talk to her again soon, so Lyss has nothing to worry about, I'm sure. ;)
Overall, great update! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Loved it!!!!

Awh..Bam got jealouss.(: & Iike how Jayde's still playing with him, even though it was obvious he was jealous at the restaurant. She's smart though, since he still has other girlfriends.

Loved the update! :D
Aha, that was probably the best Jayde chapter yet! With her playing Bam and all. I found it humorous when she used Steve-O to get him jealous. And it worked. :P
Hm... and he still has other girlfriends? Tsk tsk. I wonder if he'll get rid of them for Jayde? ;)
I think I know the answer to that but I'll wait and see what you have happen. :)
Aw, and it was sweet how he took her to that secret place. A place where he had memories. Too cute.
Overall, great update! Really can't wait for more! :D