False Pretenses - Comments

OHNOGOD, please tell me that they end up telling them about it, and then saying that they aren't going to do anything, because they fell in love with them, and that'll be the only drama because Ryan and Bam get mad.

D: You girls are killing me!

Good chapter! Linda seems like such an amazing mother and Ron seems like a cool dad! I loved them in his tribute!

Those gifs are huge. I apologize. XD

Be prepared for a longer comment seeing as I'm responding to both updates, in one.
Dancing Dead.'s new chapter: Aw... Lyss is feeling really guilty. These girls aren't cruel, I mean, cruel, cruel, and you can tell. Otherwise, they wouldn't be feeling this guilty about it, especially Lyss. :( Aw... and then Ryan noticed that something was wrong, and told her he would never leave her. :'( And he told her that he loved her. :'( Double tears for that one.



Now Lyss realizes that she's in love with him too. That update was just... so heartfelt. ♥ Great job. And sorry for the delay in commenting on it. :/

Now, atrocious's chapter:
Gah, I figured there would be something gross in the chapter since it was titled 'Mayo'. lol. I don't blame Jayde for being mad, gah. lol. I feel gross just thinking about it, like, in her shampoo, really? lol.
But she forgave him. Clearly. XD And it was kind of a surprise that she went to the next level with him that quickly. lol. But oh well. Aha.



It definitely got steamy. ;) And aha, I'm just going to stop talking about it because it's making me feel awkward. XD
Overall, great updates, you two! :D I am loving this story! :D
Can't wait for more! :D
Oh, and question, which either of you can answer: how old are they? That doesn't really pertain to the updates, but really just the story. I was just wondering because... well, yeah. I'm thinking they're younger, but I know that Jayde is at least 21 right? Since she works at Bam's bar. But yeah, that's just something I was wondering. Feel free to answer or not, it's probably not that important anyway.

xD sneaky little girls (: I like this story allot please update soon (:

Jayde gave into Bam..and she's glad she did..haha..
I wonder if the girls realize that they could just get famous by being the guys' girlfriends..and not exploit them..

Tear :( I cried a little during that chapter. God, I miss Ryan so much.

I think tht Jadye nd Lyss should just give it the blogging business fr them to get famous nd just be famous by being their girlfriend becuz in the end once the guys find out the truth not only is it goin to hurt the guys but it's goin to hurt the girls the most becuz of the shit they did just soo tht they could get famous it they wanted to be famous sooo bad they could hav done something tht is less desperate nd regretful nd more spontaneous nd rememoriable like being Bam nd Ryan's girlfriend tht is a most definite.....stupid girls........love the chapter tho can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Loving the updates! Although, couldn't Jayde and Lyssa get famous by being their girlfriends as well? I don't think they need the blog anymore, and it's going to be hard sneaking around behind the guys backs to write it. Uh-Oh they're gonna find out soon aren't they??? Yay, can't wait for more! And it's about damn time Bam got rid of Missy! Just wish he would do something like that in real life. Damn hot ass man whore!

Ugh..one got on Jayde? Ewwwiee..I kinda gagged when I read that, cause I hate spiders of all kinds. At least Bam got her mind off of it.
Haha..Missy was piiissedd..So happy that Bam decided to finally get rid of her.
Hopefully Bam & Ryan don't find out about the girls' blog...yet..

Yay, another update already!! Loved the new chapter! :D
Oh my God, I would've freaked out more if I was Jayde or Alyssa. Seriously. Gah, I'm cringing just thinking about a spider touching me. :/ The ironic part is there was this big-ass spider in our bathroom last night. I didn't see it, my sister did, but I'm glad I didn't. XD A kind of random moment to share with you, but hey, it relates. :P
Missy was pissed. lol. But yes, Bam finally told her off! :D lol. And they're getting a divorce. Nice. lol. So things are working out then in Jayde's favor.
Great update! Can't wait for the next! :D

Loved the update! :)
Sounds like the guys have something bad in store for them... gah. Tatantulas? Really? :/ I'm glad I'm not them right now, lol, that's all I have to say.
Really can't wait to see what happens!
Update again soon! :D Sorry for no Gifs. lol. I don't have any that would work at the current moment. But I'll post some in future comments. :D

Oh my god, I really can't get enough of this story.
I'm so thrilled what's gonna happen between the two couples and how their blog's gonna end up at the end of the summer.. ;)

Please write more. x33

ew...they would include tarantulas.../:

Here's to Ape approving of Jayde:



Yay! lol. And I found it hilarious that she was so bitter against Missy. XD I wasn't expecting her to say what she did, probably because I always picture her being sweet.
And aw, Bam asked Jayde to move in with him! :D Too cute. They're so great together. :)
Hm... and Jayde and Lyss may be getting even more fame than they were aiming towards: a little cameo in the movie. :o I wonder how that will affect things? It'll make them even more popular, I bet!
I'm glad things are going good though, as of now. There's a lot of sweetness. :)
Great update! Can't wait for more! :D

haha Ape cock blocked Bam. & Jayde is moving in with Bam! :D

Awh..Lyss is moving in with Ryan..how cute. I wonder if Jayde will move in with Bam...

YAY! An update! I be happy dancing! :D



lol. I was so happy when I saw I got the notification. Like, you have no idea. :P
Great update! Aw... so Ryan asked Lyss to move in with him! Too cute! And talk about a big step... I honestly wasn't expecting that. It seems like they just met, and he's already asking her to move in with him. Geeze, where does the time go? :o
Hm... I'm wondering how this will overall affect things, though. I mean, what will happen if/when Ryan finds out about what Lyss is doing? :o



That'll probably... definitely complicate things.
Great update, though. I loved that he asked her to move in. :) Too cute. lol. I need to stop thinking so much about the future and just enjoy the cute moments while they're here. I'll try to start doing that from now on.
Can't wait for more! :D

ah update<3

Well, at least Jayde apologized for the fight she caused & made up for it..to Bam anyways..
& I think that maybe, just maybe the girls miight end up forgetting about their little plan on destroying the guys..