False Pretenses - Comments

Update?????

Hey, I have just finished this story and was truly upset to see you haven't updated in a year! This story is amazing and your writing style is fantastic, I think you captured the situations perfectly. I hope you read this and reconsider leaving this the way it is. Thank you for sharing your talent with us!

I'm sad that this story hasn't been updated on. I was going through my subscriptions and this one came up. I didn't delete it in the hopes that one day it is finished. It really was one of my favs. :)

More updates please! I really want to read what happens next. I kind of think bam is going to try and get jade back but I will be driven insane until one of you lovely lady's update! You are both amazing writers and it seems I always find myself ingrossed in one of your stories. I cant wait for more. I just can't handle Bam so depressed. Can't you just let him be happy already?

this is so good, please update soon!

Bam saw the video with Lyss and he is soo distraught tht he is drinking himself to a stupor, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

*about Jayde not falling for him
Or not staying with him. I should've phrased that better.

Sorry this took me, like, over a month to comment. :/
Great job with the update, though! :D Bam's... wow. He's pretty distraught. :( Poor guy. I feel bad for him.
Maybe Lyss can ease the pain he's going through a little. Idk... but the hope's there. Maybe she can somehow get it through to him that Jayde did love him. Maybe she should tell him about Jayde falling for him because Jayde thought Bam was going to break her heart, not the other way around. I really hope that's something she mentions, because that may be the key thing to mention.
Anyway, amazing job with the update! Glad you finally posted! :)
Can't wait for more! :D

please write some more! its so good!! i love it!!

A update yay! I can't wait for the drama to unfold next chapter!

YEA! an Update!!! :) :) :)

Poor Bam he is so heartbroken its sad :( I just hope tht Lyss can talk to him, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I'm so glad you updated! I was really hoping that the last chapter wasn't how it ended, though I don't know if a talk with Bam will help. I love Ryan wanting to name the baby Jellybean! It's just adorable. I can't wait (literally) for an update! :D <3

Hm... I think this gif best fits this chapter:



You never do fully realize what could happen until it actually does. That I believe anyone can agree on, so in that way, you can't really blame Jayde. :( Because she thought the outcome would be different, but she didn't see that it was worse until she actually went through with it.
I think that's enough 'I-told-you-so', in itself.
And I think it was good she made the video to express how she felt... that way, people can see it and see that she is serious instead of seeing it written and possibly doubting that she's not. Because if you write something, you can just edit it as much as you like. When you say something, though, you can't exactly take those words back. Or the truth is really written on your face, moreover, if you do.
Maybe one of the guys will see it and give her a break. At the very least, let her explain herself before they just cut her off just because of what she's done. And let her say what she needs to say before they say anything. Idk, though. What she did was kind of big to get over right away... so it's hard to say if they will or not.
I thought it was decent of her with at least trying to call Lyss, even though she wasn't able to talk to her. It's the thought that counts, even though she couldn't because of all that's happened.
Anyway, great job with the update. Loved the new chapter! :)
Can't wait for the next one! :D

Omg so much sadness in one chapter becuz she knows she fucked up but I'm glad she is shutting down the blog.......i don't know what she was thinking by callin Lyss becuz she knows tht Lyss wasnt goin to answer instead u got Ryan, u should have left a voicemail and hope tht Lyss got it before Ryan.......can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

YEA AN UPDATE!!!! ^_^ I was sooo excited when I got that email. You made my day!

Updates! I read all of this in one day. It's truly amazing. :]

I'll comment again since this story is definitely worthy of more comments. :)
Loved the update! Can't wait for more! :D

I want more updates!

Omg this chapter was so sad like I didn't realize how much Bam did for Jayde till he mention it he truly loved her and she didn't notice it till now omg I can just see Bam's heart break from the moment Ryan told him the truth to him talkin to Jayde i feel so sorry for him I just want to give him a hug....Novak I don't know y u decided to butt in their conversation it didn't concern u at the moment u r soo irritating.....Ryan was dead ass serious when he told Jayde to never come to West Chester again or ever talk to him or Lyss again if she wants to be with Ryan....Jady I don't whether to feel sorry for u or just say u fucked up big time I mean I would feel sorry for u to kno u can't keep in contact with Lyss anymore and u officially don't have any friends now but I really can't feel sorry fr u becuz u did fuck up big time u broke Bam Margera's heart with a snap of a finger, Ryan Dunn hates ur ass now and on top of tht u didn't realize how much u fucked up till Bam told u all the things he has done for u and it was a lot becuz he thought u were the one...apparently not becuz u r like the other girls....I wonder whats going to happen next can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)