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  • Max Ryde

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    Haven't commented in a while but howdy!
    The devil should totally be Pete or Patrick stump from FOB...
    October 19th, 2011 at 11:16am
  • trixcereal

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    i'm thinking its either pete or gereard..
    but watch me me be so fucking off.
    but this was too cute,
    make some more
    October 17th, 2011 at 10:41pm
  • maxx danziger

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    I kind of understand a little more now. I loved the kiss at the end I was worried Ryan would be mad at him. Still who is the devil then ;D I love this so much it's so original.
    October 17th, 2011 at 10:38pm
  • User Friendly.

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    The only thing I hated was how short it was.
    Everything else was amazing.
    How sweet that Brendon made a deal with the devil in order to love.
    And the kiss at the end showed that it was so he could love Ryan...

    So perfect.
    Can't wait for the next update, love bug!
    October 17th, 2011 at 11:55am
  • the space between

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    this is getting intense..ooh i hope this story never ends <33
    October 17th, 2011 at 03:30am
  • trixcereal

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    don't even have to ask,
    i love you.
    i want you to study,
    so you can pass, or graduate.. or, idk.
    its weird though..
    i actually looked forward to being mind fucked.
    so thank you (:
    October 15th, 2011 at 05:42pm
  • maxx danziger

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    Seriously confused. But in a good way.
    I wonder what the deal with the devil actually was....
    October 15th, 2011 at 05:18pm
  • CoolWhip48

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    Officially mindfucked.
    I'm addicted to this and there are so many cool twist and turns.
    Can't wait for the next update.
    October 10th, 2011 at 09:25am
  • trixcereal

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    i'm shitting my pants,
    i thought that lifetime movie i watched was intense,
    no where compared to this.
    i love this story
    i smile everytime i see you updated.
    oh yah
    mindfucked AGAIN,
    why you fuck me so hard
    October 9th, 2011 at 05:28am
  • FueledbyHorribleKid8

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    OMFG HE MADE A DEAL WITH THE DEVIL!! GAAAH!!!!! This story is getting me way too overexcited. lol.
    October 9th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • Max Ryde

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    Cool. :D
    October 8th, 2011 at 01:10pm
  • APoeticTragedy

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    You're such a freakin MINDFUCKER! O__________O
    But I forgive you ^u^
    Update reeeaaaallly soon okay? :D
    October 8th, 2011 at 05:57am
  • Max Ryde

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    not mindfucked! :D
    October 6th, 2011 at 03:46am
  • trixcereal

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    whaaaaaa.
    totally mindfucked.
    keep it coming
    October 6th, 2011 at 03:34am
  • Nameandnumbers

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    What's happening :O
    October 5th, 2011 at 05:21am
  • frerardlove1

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    omg crazy im totally mind fucked
    October 4th, 2011 at 11:52pm
  • frerardlove1

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    i love this story
    September 30th, 2011 at 03:50am
  • SexyDork17

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    oops... Should proofread... God not Gow
    Glad not gkad
    okay thats it for mistakes :D

    xo
    Anita:)
    September 30th, 2011 at 03:49am
  • SexyDork17

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    butt hurt mcr fan here ;) lol Well you
    did call him a death Gow which means
    he's a god of SOMETHING so I'ma
    forget the second part ;;D haha it's
    totally cool with whatever you do... It's
    your story so call him fat if you want :p
    SO gkad to finally hear what Brendon is,
    hm, deadly sin. Desire. Totally describes
    him :) So does that mean Pete and Gerard
    are sins too?? and if so what?! :D Sorry
    I'm just all excited now :) More soon por
    favor {please;)} !!!

    xo
    Anita:)
    September 30th, 2011 at 03:48am
  • Max Ryde

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    heh Gerard...
    Angels? Are they creepy stone statues by any chance? :P
    September 30th, 2011 at 03:38am
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