Shimmer. - Comments

Already love this story. I can relato to it in so many levels it's like it told a bit of my story.
I feel so sad for them both. Falling apart as time passes, staying with someone just because you are used to it... Interesting topics to talk about. This will be really good!

vreolkgbesro I AM FREAKING OUT, MAN! Seems like your writing is starting to go in a more serious direction! Or just for now, idk, but I am loving it! I feel so bad for both Rosemary and John. They're both miserable. Rosemary is because of John's drinking, John is for some reason that's causing him to drink, it's not good at all! And your explanation of the story so far reminds me of the lyrics to Into Your Arms about falling out of love. They just need to find their way back to the start! hahaha, well I definitely love this so far. I think that John might actually cheat one day and that's what could push Rosemary over the edge and finally break things off with him. Idk, I can't tell too much from this so far!

Wow the first chapter is very heartbreaking.
I mean Rosie is cleaning up after John's mess and working until she is exhausted while John is off partying his life away.
I bet John has been sleeping around behind Rosie back since John can't even look her in the eyes and the rest know about it since Jared wants to tell his best friend Rosie but he sided with John.
Man this secrets is going to come out in the open and someone will get hurt badly and I bet it will be Rosie.
So they both don't want leave each other because of fear of dying alone?
I do hope that resolve this rut somehow because what they are doing can't go on forever.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hoymaygaahh This is just brilliant
I felt pain for them okay
I feel so sad for the both of them gaahh

Wow! I can tell from this first chapter that this going to e a great story! Can't wait for more:)

This story is soooo good so far :)
Update soon!

As I was reading I thought of the movie "Blue Valentine".
And as I think that movie is really great (and you told me to watch it!!!) I also think this story is great too!
Can't wait for more :)

yayayayayayayay! haha. im happy. thank you :) this chapter makes me sad, because i get that numb empty feeling, and the fear to leave. becayse when your like that, youve made the ither person your everything and now youre afraid if you leave youll have nothing :( cant wait for the next update!!!! :DDD

this story sounds like it is going to be amazing.
cannot wait for more :)
<3

omg did i see a little death cab quote in the end?(:
it was sad.. but i love it already can't wait for the second chapter! :D

Awww. It's sad.
MORE!

freakin' brilliance? that's all i can say. XD

I'm in love with this story!!!

lalalalaalala. wonderfulllllllllllllll

This is going to be epic. I can tell. So hurry up and update so I can procrastinate from doing my college readings for a lil bit longer!

Omg so excited oh my god I just love all of your john stories hflcnsjcoenckdnx

excited!!

Well, I couldn't really wait for this!!!! :)))))

I'm essssided for this to get started!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hhehehe im soooooooooooooooooo excited. i love the pictures and the laypit and everythiiiinnnnnnngggggggggggg. cant wait :) ps what song is th lyic from?