The Fox and The Hare - Comments

You're the next John Green.

That was flipping adorable!!! Like what guys is amazing enough to teach a girl how to play HIS video games. Only MICHAEL!!! Michael just needs a huge hug. He really just, I can't describe how perfect he is. That was a lovely update so I can't wait for the next one. Update please?????

that was so cute.
oh my gosh.
I love Michael, he's so sweet with Delilah c:
AND WHEN HE PUNCHED JOSH IN THE BICEP, I WAS LIKE, "YOU GO FOX MICHAEL, YOU DEFEND YOUR GIRL! ;D"
please update soon? (:

That was such a great update... I loved it and the dialog was pretty funny... You know I really enjoy how he seems to know what she is thinking ... It also now wonder why home boy punched his friend... What is Michael hiding.. Well anyway I really enjoyed this chapter it was great keep up the good work

Your first chapter has so much detail that I’m generally stunned into silence. The way you introduced everything was so mesmerizing that I found myself really in the story, instead of just reading it, which is boring. Hare, I’m assuming, is a very relatable character. Michael, too, if you think about it. I felt like everyone you mentioned was real, and that was just magical!

SO I had to catch up but I did and this is truly off to a beautiful start. The unexpected appearance at the concert was absolutely adorable and perfect as well as the french fry part. Consider updating soon?

that was so cute, awh c: ESPECIALLY THE PART WHERE HE SURPRISED HER. is it weird that I'm quite curious who they went to go see? please update soon!

that was so cute, awh c: ESPECIALLY THE PART WHERE HE SURPRISED HER. is it weird that I'm quite curious who they went to go see? please update soon!

that was so cute, awh c: ESPECIALLY THE PART WHERE HE SURPRISED HER. is it weird that I'm quite curious who they went to go see? please update soon!

This is a very well written story that is written in a way that I have never read before... And I love it, the concept is very original ... It would be super cool if there was more dialog between the main characters just so we can get more of a feel for Michael and his relationship with Delilah...

everything about this story is perfect. theyre so sweet. i would love more conversation rather than details, they mesh so well together!!

OHMYGAWSH THAT WAS SO CUTE AND PERFECT.
"I saw my heroes become mortal in front of me" or something like that is still the perfect line. I love it.
please update soon? (:

ugh that was so coot
and precious
and just
I can't even.
please update soon? ;D

god, I'm in love with Michael.
he has that carefree attitude c:
and Delilah's giving in.
so please update soon? ;D
YOU KNOW AH LUB YEW

OH MY GOSH THAT WAS SUPER DUPER CUTE
ugh I can't even explain it.
he just smiled at her with that half smile. oh shucks.
AND THAT LAST LINE!
go for the bad ones: they're real.
I love you.
so much.
please update soon! (:

the new layout is such a beaut, oh my gosh! c:
and even though you're rewriting it, it's still amazing (:
please update soon!

its cool you're rewriting and its great but i really think your story and layout was just as great before

This is so CUTE!! I absolutely love this story. It's just adorable. I am subscribing and I can't wait to read more. Update soon!!!

Well, it's official, I think I've found my favorite story on Mibba.
I really do love Delilah and Michael; I'm just over here smiling all the little moments they have.
But honestly, I just really love the way you write this, it's... I don't even know the word for it.
I like how you include the little details, but it doesn't take away from the story, it adds to it.
I like how the way their relationship is building, and it's not just all thrown at the reader's face.
I like it all. I LOVE IT ALL.

I'm glad I stumbled upon this story; I'm looking forward to updates!

I think the story is perfect. One of the best I've ever read.
It's just so -unf.

sweet mother of candy.

Why did I read this at night?
Now I can't sleep because of your awesome story.
Update more so I won't sleep at all c:
And maybe transform into a nocturnal creature.