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  • vices

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    OH MY GOD THAT WAS PERFECT
    IT WAS SO CUTE AND JUST UGH
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON
    PLEASE? c:
    March 19th, 2012 at 05:03am
  • thegirlwhocouldflyxx

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    I love the Power Rangers! Silent readers suck!!!
    March 18th, 2012 at 01:34am
  • thegirlwhocouldflyxx

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    I'm fascinated with the story and where you'll take it. I like your characters, Micheal reminds me of someone I know. Update?
    March 7th, 2012 at 07:47am
  • hannahlovex3

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    This story is addictive
    February 15th, 2012 at 02:43am
  • xAquaRain

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    I love this! Well written and great mental images. Delilah actually reminds me of myself. I'm just as shy as her. Great story, keep it up.(:
    February 15th, 2012 at 01:22am
  • lalala247

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    This is a very cool story. :)
    I like the whole idea and you are really good at the describitions. :D
    Subscriber! :)
    P.S. I love your layout. It's amazing!
    January 22nd, 2012 at 11:44pm
  • vices

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    ugh, this is just so beautiful.
    please update soon!
    January 22nd, 2012 at 02:19am
  • Answering.Alexandra.

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    You are an amazingly talented writer. Consider me subscribed.(:
    January 22nd, 2012 at 12:57am
  • Miss Velveteen

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    What an interesting start to a story. I really hope you keep up with this because I would like very much to read some more. The characters already have drawn me in and the unique writing style is beautiful. Please update soon.
    November 25th, 2011 at 08:58pm
  • arumdp

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    This. Is. Great. Update soon? :)
    November 25th, 2011 at 06:46pm
  • sui.generis

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    Beautifully written. I adore how you seamlessly connect what is going on and what she knows. Lovely, I'll be checking in for more!
    November 25th, 2011 at 05:51pm
  • Cerbera.

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    This is awful! How could it only have two chapters?! T_T
    I have a good feeling about this story, so I think I will keep up with your updates---that is if you plan to stick with it until the end, which I hope you will. :D
    It's also interesting in the way you narrate the story, almost like a diary. I especially like the way Dalilah verifies the truth behind the rumors, and the little quirks of Michael's that she seems to find endearing. What can I say? It's adorable. >_<
    November 25th, 2011 at 05:26pm
  • ShiznitzGirl

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    I love this story already! I like how she tells the story like she's having a flashback of her memories... Wonderful!
    November 25th, 2011 at 05:04pm
  • Dilseacht

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    I am intrigued already. I hope more comes of this. Great layout by the way!
    November 23rd, 2011 at 02:37am
  • voidoids

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    Loved it.
    October 10th, 2011 at 03:31am
  • BirdAttack

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    I really like the first chapter
    i hope you update soon :)
    September 17th, 2011 at 09:38pm
  • wild lavender;

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    Wow, amazing I love the first chapter.
    September 17th, 2011 at 07:50pm
  • wild lavender;

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    Wow, amazing I loved the first chapter.
    September 17th, 2011 at 07:50pm
  • americanmouth

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    omg, im hooked already. please write more:]
    September 17th, 2011 at 06:25pm
  • jolie sophie

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    Oh my god what a beautiful layout! It's unlike anything I've ever seen. And the story is just so intriguing! I'm very excited if this story is going to debut.
    August 28th, 2011 at 02:38am
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