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  • TOXOID

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    I only have two things to say as of right now.

    1. I am going to promote your stories all over my profile thing, which I think is long overdue.
    & 2. I'm seriosuly contemplating nominating this to Project Fiction.
    Seriously, bro.
    December 2nd, 2011 at 03:45am
  • slumflower

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    this is me right now.
    That's me right fucking there and it's on a url because I don't want to waste precious comment space with a tumblr picture/gif/thing

    FRANKIE DEAR GOD I THINK I LOVE YOU PERU.
    Peru's aazing what with the culture and you know Frankie being nicknamed Peru by Atlas. That's one fucking cool last name. and Parker deserves that last name because he's not a DOUCHEFUCKING BAG THAT NEEDS TO BE CUT WITH A BUTCHER'S KNIFE. heh.refer to previous gif up der. ~.~
    anyways the nickname that Parker gave her shows that they're actually more like siblings than anything else. They're closer than they'd admit.

    BUT WHAT THIS MADE ME ALMOST CRY, LAUGH, PISS MY PANTS, THEN CRY AGAIN.
    but don't worry I didn't piss my pants. I don't do that.

    “He wanted, uh, he, he thought that we could improve our relationship by, uh, by doing things,” I mumbled, feeling my face grow warmer by the second.

    “Oh?”


    THIS. UGH. SO GOD DAMNED CUTE. SO CUTE.

    Freddie you amazing boy, "I want to know because I don't want to make the same mistakes as him." T__T
    and then THIS: it’s like everything you thought you know was a lie, it’s like…

    IS TODAY MAKE RILEY CRY DAY? HUH?

    I feel like all I'm doing is fangirling over these two but I love this story and I dread the day that this will end. IDREAD EET. Wonderful, wonderful chapter as always (: I hope you update soon <3

    oh and I think they meddle just enough, they're tightly knit group. I would love a blog, gosh that would be so cute! If like all of the characters would give like statuses and advice or something like that or just y'know whatever you had in mind. I'd totes follow or whatevuuur.
    December 2nd, 2011 at 01:12am
  • maedrinksblood

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    Ahhh, knew it but fuck it still sucks. That flashback was lovely, hahaha, Graham...hahaha. He sounds so less badass-y now which I love. I hope she tells Freddie soon so it doesn't cause problems. But that last chapter was perfect. Part 2 soon please. [;
    November 26th, 2011 at 07:42am
  • ImaginationOverload.

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    Holy shit. This story is absolutely incredible! I'm pissed at Parker for taking the reins in telling Freddie about Frost; not his place. But I do think Frankie should tell Freddie about Frost and why she seems to be distant. It's only fair to him. And how dare Frost call her like that? Especially after the latest chapter when all was revealed. I knew that was him on the phone with Izzie in Frankie's room. That kid's a bad seed and Frankie should have hung up as soon as she heard his voice. I respect Izzie for not disclosing to Frankie that it was Frost on the phone, but I think she should have told her and let Frankie handle it. This story's keeping me on my toes; it's truly amazing <3
    November 26th, 2011 at 02:35am
  • slumflower

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    hello to you to(:
    WHAT? SO MUCH ANGST I WAS LIKE SHIT, SHIT, I know what's going to happen but ohmygod how is it going to happen? D":
    poor frankie.
    TEAM PARKER&IZZIE
    because they're total bamfs in love.
    I wish parker had beat the shit out of GRAHAM. yeah that's right his name's not frost, frost is way too cool for him his name will forever be bob in my mind since he's just dumbass.
    HOW COULD HE NOT LOVE FRANKIE? SHE'S THE SHIT YO.
    anyways, I'm glad that he cheated on her because now she's rid of him. I hope that Frankie just breaks down and tells Freddie everything, it'll be better for them in the long run.
    AND FROST BETTER BACK THE FUCK OFF, AIN'T NOBODY WANNA BE HIS BABY ANYMORE.
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    November 25th, 2011 at 09:18pm
  • writhing

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    I was about to read the newest chapter, and then I realized that I'd have no idea what's going on because I haven't read this story in a long time.

    Damn, I'm so behind. D:
    SHAME ON ME.
    I SHALL CATCH UP ON ALL THE AMAZINGNESS THAT I MISSED.
    So, until then... PEACE AND BLESSINGS, HOMIE.
    November 23rd, 2011 at 03:50am
  • maedrinksblood

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    Waahh. I missed this story, so glad it's back. I think it's Frost calling her. /: Which would be shitty. Keep updating, I can't wait for more. [:
    November 22nd, 2011 at 03:56am
  • TOXOID

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    OH MY GOD BBGRL, IT'S FROST ISN'T IT?
    Frost can just go lay an egg or something because Freddie makes everybody here fall in love.
    They so deserve each other, it honestly isn't fair. Like unff, let him in bitch.

    He kissed my forehead, my nose, and then my lips, chuckling.

    “God, I’m so happy to see you.”


    Waaaaahh! That's all I can say that partially describes how I feel about that.
    AND YOU MENTIONED MEH? OH BRO, I'M SO HONORED.
    I will update soon! IwillIwillIwill!
    And I inspired you to write something? Like I'm finna click on it now.
    Holy shit.
    November 21st, 2011 at 10:02pm
  • vintage hearts;

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    I'm super tired but I was going to make some joke about how you can't be tamed. About the layouts and all, you know? It's what, the fifth one since you've started?
    Not that I mind, I like this one too. It's a little tricky to read, to be honest, but it's good stuff :)

    Frankie, Frankie, Frankie. I think part of her is using Freddie, but the other part really does just want to be with him. And she uses that term to try and create a barrier between them which Freddie [and Izzie and Parker] are trying to push down. I mean, just to be free doesn't mean you have to use people to achieve that- she could easily do it with him, you know? It would be like a benefit, it doesn't have to be the top priority.
    She's just being a little stupid, I think. But hey, she's human.

    Freddie in bed was adorable. It's how I would practically picture his room but I think it would be somewhat messy at the least, you know? A little cluttered maybe. But that piece was adorable, especially that conclusion and making her blush. I was beaming so hard my cheeks hurt and I felt like a chipmunk.

    Ugh. Surprise parties are so hard to pull off- I've had to suffer through three. They usually work well but sometimes... I don't know, you know? It's tough stuff, really. But yay for Freddie!!

    I'm so nervous about the caller. It's either her parents or Frost. Most likely the latter. Or an old friend?
    No. Frost. It's Frost. Isn't it? It is, I just know it. It has to be.
    Though why would he have called Izzie.... Hm. I'll probably slap myself whenever we find out who it is, because I'll probably know or something but I didn't really consider it a choice. I feel pretty confused. we'll see.

    So just... update. asap. yeah? Hopefully the hiatus thing really is good and over and you're getting everything back on track!! Can't wait to read more :)

    Oh oh oh and the Star Wars, how it was their thing?
    My heart melted. Just so you know.
    November 20th, 2011 at 06:42pm
  • MforMaeri

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    Such an amazing chapter! I love how Frankie went into Freddie's room looking for comfort and how happy Freddie was.. that was just too cute!
    And I have a bad feeling the caller was Frost?
    I assume he cheated on her big time or used her.. I don't know. Something huge, definitely!
    xx
    November 20th, 2011 at 05:43pm
  • slumflower

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    “Yeah. You and Parker have, y’know, having unprotected sex and Freddie and me have Star Wars. Cute, I know.”
    Let me just say that line right there made me start laughing so loud.
    Oh, god, Frankie.
    Y U SO FUNNY??
    you know I was mostly concentrating on the fact of Frankie & Freddie possibly banging in the near future, killing Frost (like he's so cool with a name like that NO! his name should be something like Gregory.) I almost forgot that she was using him for a thesis!
    I just wanted to go in there and be like, 'NO FRANKIE! BAD! throw those notes away and go be so adorable with Freddie that I want to vomit up roses.'
    I mean, c'mon now qrl there are better things to do in an experiment with a subject like Freddie ~.~
    oh yeah. I just made the naughty face.
    ANYWAYS. I CANNOT EXPRESS MY HAPPINESS OF THIS COMING OFF HIATUS. (well, Kinda. Not really =P) but still, updates are updates :)
    and author's note, author's note
    so I was like WOAH! she found some good BMTH/A7x stories? Lemme read!
    and then I was like ....wait. 'cause I was being slow. It's morning, don't blame me haha.
    so thank you love ♥
    and on the other hand... Frost.
    I think that he got so fed up with the sex or whatever problems that he was douchebag and cheated...
    but I feel like I'm being predictable..
    BUT THAT WAS HIM ON THE PHONE WASN'T IT?
    Y THE CLIFFHANGERRR???? please update soonkbye♥(:
    November 20th, 2011 at 04:55pm
  • slumflower

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    ~strangled fan girl cry~
    WHY HIATUS?
    please give back freddie&frankie.
    please?
    November 20th, 2011 at 01:46am
  • fictionsymphony

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    This is the shortest comment I'm ever gonna give this story hopefully. But I'm pretty depressed right now, though it has nothing to do with this story. I love this story and the chapter that I finally found time to read. I just can't give a quality comment at the moment because of how I'm feeling. So just ignore me and know you're doing a superb job with this.
    November 2nd, 2011 at 10:38pm
  • vintage hearts;

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    Did you just post this? I have a feeling you didnt'. but nothing told me, so... yeah.

    Aren't you a doll! I feel special how you mentioned me in your author's note. Glad to be of service, ma'am!

    Once again, you tossed us into a chapter without warning us about the change in character's views. It took me a minute to sort out it was Izzie, so I just pretty much read the whole thing over once I actually did. Not that I'm complaining, of course ;)

    She actually seemed pretty calm in this chapter- but she started really coming forth towards the end of her piece which I really enjoyed. Her relationship with Parker is just plain out intriguing and amusing.

    POOR FREDDIE. He can hold my hand and cuddle with me any day. Just sayin'. As long as he smells all right, of course. But seriously now.

    Parker. The way you began this story, he seems like a pretty basic guy but the more we delve in, the more complex he gets. You hate him, but then... now... he's really growing on me and I'm loving his character more and more. Especially this conclusion.

    Frankie really does have issues she's refusing to address and she needs to do it for any hope she has in her romantic sphere of her life. Parker was smart enough to see it and had bluntly put it out for her. I hope she can sort herself out before she hurts Freddie too much or anything.

    Freddie deserves the truth, and he deserves the love in return!! Poor guy.

    I cannot wait for the next chapter- I have honestly no clue what may happen now, I just love it.

    If the party does work out, that should be interesting. Is that where everything will blow up and out of proportion? Hmmm?

    Can't wait. Glad haitus wasn't too long ;)
    October 26th, 2011 at 05:18am
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    So, I'm gonna hurry up and get this out of the way before I get to my 'real' comment.
    Day (me) is sad.
    Hiatus are no fun.
    They depress me...well yeah, they really depress me.
    Can I know why? I'm just curious...you don't have to though.
    Okay...real comment.

    I have a problem everytime she starts thinking about Frost I want to knock some sense into her and say "HEY! YOU HAVE FREDDIE NOW. STOP THINKING OF THAT JERKFACE FROST! STOP IT WOMAN!"
    Seriously she really needs to stop thinking about him. He's a huge jerkwad. He's a horny, idiotic jerkbag. I'm use jerk in different variations so show how much I truly despise him. That's a lot huh? I have this burning fire of hate for him.
    On to the next section of the comment.
    #TEAM FREDDIE FOR THE FUCKING WIN! :D
    I love him so much.
    He didn't even ask about why she was cry. He could tell that she didn't really want to talk about it. I found that incredibly nice but at the same time I kinda wanted him to pull it out of her. But that's not him so...yeah.
    He was completely sweet to here.
    HOW COULD SHE NOT HAVE BEEN TO A FOOTBALL GAME?!
    How is that possible?
    Gawd, I loved this so much.

    Until it's off hiatus I guess I won't get to leave any of my lovely comments that I seem to rant in for awhile. So until then I suppose. ):

    <3
    October 14th, 2011 at 11:16am
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    HIATUS?????
    Well, I hope things are all right....

    Oh my gosh. Mine was a foreboding wasn't it? My last comment?? You were like "WHY NOT MOCK HER SHE THINKS ITS OVER ANYWAYS" alksdjfalksjdfds.... Ugh.
    Although that ending is almost acceptable.
    Almost.
    Not quite.

    You brought more Frost into this! I didn't think you'd really do much more pieces with him, but this was a lot and it was really unique, I like it :)

    Parker's reaction to the budding relationship was intriguing and it could be nothing but it almost seemed like there was something behind it, I don't really know. And I'm sure that twitter conversation was indeed entertaining, heh...

    One of my favorite lines of this story: "I can do lots of things" and I don't know why I like this line so much. Simple, basic, and I'm not thinking about it in a dirty mindset or anything. It's just so... perfect. It's almost a feel-good statement for some reason here, but with anyone else it might sound off. With Freddie.. it was perfect.

    Frost seemed a lot more human, although stupid. Boys and their hormones, seriously- stupid school teaching "how close we are to animals"- doesn't mean it's okay [or a good idea] to act like them, and that just ticks me off. I'd totally have tazered that guy in the beginning. No lie. Well, it would have to wait until I buy one, but yeah.


    “You’re too cute for your own good. You know that?”

    “What?”

    “Really, it’s ridiculous. Where do you want me to start? I could talk about your eyes or your hair or how smart you are or how you piss off Parker more than I do and how I never thought that was possible. Maybe I could talk about that weird blushing thing you do or how you snort a little when you laugh, or how you love Star Wars as much as I do, or…I don’t know. I could talk about lots of things.” He smiled, reaching over and tucking some of my hair behind my ear. “I didn’t know I had to have a reason to like you. I just do.”


    That was adorable. Crushingly cute. More than just any gushy romance story. It was Freddie and Frankie- unique and adorable and ugh...
    I want Freddie.
    And her description of him just made me want him more, all of this. He is flawed- here, a little too loving seriously- but so perfect, it makes me sick. Well, mostly sad.

    And more sad because this is on hiatus. Hope things are going okay.
    Best of luck in everything and anything, dear.
    October 14th, 2011 at 06:44am
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    September 30th, 2011 at 12:18am
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    YAY A STAR IS BORNNNNN

    Ehm. Anyways. So. Is it wrong I enjoyed this chapter so much? Definitely a high lite, definitely one of your best! It was so much fun and I wanted to keep laughing. All of this was so... realistic and relateable. Well, except for the conclusion. That's never happened to me and probably never will.

    Izzie, that poor girl. I totally understand her though- I get so impatient with people especially when they cannot see what I so obviously see around me, you know? They get so clueless and refuse to believe. So yeah- I really liked seeing all of that side to her though. Usually, it seems we just see her normal-crazy side, but here she was a little more mature and yet still Izzie and I really enjoyed that.

    Anxiety pills? Did I forget about those or are you just now mentioning those?? :3

    Parker. Oh. My. Gosh. I love that annoying little brat. I just love him. His ranting was just beautiful and so priceless, I just can imagine him waving his arms everywhere and everything, I'd love to see that in person it is SO hilarious! I love it, I love him, you are wonderful.

    And their effects on her worked. I mean, first with Izzie she confessed everything which I think is probably good and healthy to do and I never do that because it's my friends who go crazy over boys and I refuse to even care. But I think that was a big stepping stone for Frankie, and I could really relate to a lot of what she said. She doesn't think she's ugly, but she's confused about him and herself and everything- totally understandable and I really like the way you wrote it out for her.

    Then Parker... She sort of grew impatient and bold and realized something had to be said, so she did it! She just marched on up and spat out everything to Freddie which takes guts and I like his reaction and how he handles this and I don't know.

    This chapter was so packed with character I don't even know what to think. I mean, you could end it there and I'd probably even be somewhat content with that.

    But don't. Seriously. I have to know what happens next with the rest of the story and I just have to know and I can't wait to see their relationship and how everything turns out in the conclusion. IT BETTER BE GOOD WOMAN
    September 25th, 2011 at 08:59pm
  • slumflower

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    it’s you, it’s always been you.
    ohmygod.
    i love you for updating.
    but i hate you for creating one of the most ADORABLE CHARACTERS EVER.
    asdfgh
    if any cute guy who liked star wars said that to me I'd be sold.
    Like, shit.
    If only, if only.
    update soon :)
    September 24th, 2011 at 08:28pm
  • MforMaeri

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    AW WHY CAN'T FREDDIE BE MINE?
    September 24th, 2011 at 03:59pm