Simple Kind of Life - Comments

Love the story so far!
Can't wait for more :)

Yikes, how I was not subscribes to this I'll never know. Totally missed ur update.

“Girl, he’s got yellow fever.” Girl I love Ang. Everyone needs a friend like that.

Love the pace. U know I love a long story, And who cares as long as u write this well. Ill take one once a month. I have slowed down a lot myself.

Love ya.

i love it... and i know i am probably behind but my computer hates me..keep it up

p.s. i hope to update soon by my computer crashed and I lost all 12 chapters taht i had written so now I have to catch up but

I LOVE it. Big surprise there, huh? I think my Avery/Royal story will be disappearing soon. Considering Cameron, who I based Royal off of...well, I really don't want to talk about it publically, since it isn't too nice. But keep going at the pace you're going, I say. Hereagain, though, that's just my opinion. I still love it, and I'll continue to love it, no matter what you do to it :D

Loving this story so far..can't wait to see what happens!

I don't think it's too slow! I like the gradual build up. We get to know the characters and their circumstances more that way. I liked seeing a bit more of Hank in this chapter...he seems like a great guy, but I hope Angie can get a little action too.

I'm excited to see where Jeff and Avery lead to. Can't wait for more soon! Well done!

I soo want her to go over for drinks! Great update

I like how this is going so far, I personally like stories with a slower pace, it gives the reader a chance to empathize with the characters and makes the plot more realistic. I love what you've done with your characters so far, the way you're developing Avery's story is interesting and I just love Angie, the Ken Doll comment was fantastic. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

I think the pace of the story is realistic...i can tell Angie's gonna get herself a hot piece of ass at Jeff's tonight...i wonder who it will be!

Ok, so love Jeff. And she has gotten him intrigued. Love it. Now she gotta get his playboy ass to settle down, lol

Freaking love this!
And i love the fact that it's a spin off not a sequel. I'm glad Cam is in this still. I can't wait to see how Carts handles girl next door.
You do amazing things when you write and i can't wait to read them.
Sarah

Really interesting story so far, awsome wirting.

Love it :) I actually can't wait for the next chapter. YAY, RELIEF FROM ALL MY UNI WORK! <3

good chapter update soon

haha jeff is already affected by her and he hasn't even met her! can't wait for them to actually meet!

Can't wait to see what you have in store for poor Jeff!

It's just the first chapter and I'm already loving this story, I really like your character and her plot line seems quite interesting and original. There's a couple of details that I really enjoyed, the first is that her younger brother lives with her and the other is her best friend's marriage, very good ideas. I can't wait to see how Jeff is going to come into the story, but I'm sure it's going to be a good read, you're such a great writer. Hope you can update soon!

I am so freaking behind...loved it cant wait to see where it goes..

P.S. I am trying to get my story up I just want more than one chapter written before I post so I can post regularly..so hopefully soon

Gah, i was trying to read some more of my Cam story and then thought i'd see if you had a chapter on this yet and you did.
I don't care if it's a boring chapter my gosh it's good. I never in a million years thought that he would actually leave and stay gone.
The whole arron thing kind of confused me at first until i realized it was Ave's younger brother.
Can't wait for more on both your stories. Are they some how going to connect? *GASP* if so you're sneaky. XD
sarah.

AHh love it so far. Can't wait for Jeff, having withdraw :) Love Lil, she seems super cute..