Textbook Romance - Comments

Rachele Kristine; (100)

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Oh my gawd. Hahaha. I can't believe I refound this story. This was my first story that I ever read by you, and this is where I fell in love with your writing. <3

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June 23rd, 2013 at 07:26am

cruciatus. (455)

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You have no idea how excited I was to finally be able to read a great Max Green fanfic. I’m sure there’s others out there, but I’ve never been able to find them. This, however…this was absolutely fantastic and amazing and dear lord, I cried so many times during this story. I just love the way you portrayed Nev and Max, and Craig and Tey and just everyone. I simply loved it. Words can’t even…I can’t even…Yeah. I can’t even.

I think part of the reason I loved this story so much is because it’s not conventional romance. It’s not all, “girl meets Max Green, they fall in love in a day, and then they’re screwing each other in every chapter.” No. Your story wasn’t that. It was perfection. It was beautiful and realistically done and I swear to God, this is the best Max Green story in existence. Honestly. It really is.

I also love the fact that it’s so clear that you liked writing this story while you were doing it. It shows in the way you write the characters. It’ so detailed and I mean, really detailed. Everything from the hot cheetohs to the habit Max has of hiding his stuff (one would assume that he wouldn’t just hide his makeup from Craig, but other things as well…alas, you included that in this story, making it perfectly, beautifully realistic.)

I also like the fact that this didn’t focus on Ronnie. Before you get me wrong, let me explain…because you already know I’m a huge Ronnie fan. I like the fact that this didn’t focus on Ronnie because during the time period of this story, had Ronnie been included it would have been so dramatic and it would have been unnecessary drama. You didn’t do that. It shows that you’re a serious writer who comes up with amazing plots…and trust me, amazing plots you most definitely come up with.

This was just amazing. I can’t even. I still can’t even. I’m just gonna go and cuddle with my teddy bear now and keep re-reading this until the end of time. Thank you so much for writing it, you amazing person. You’re fantastic. :D

July 22nd, 2012 at 10:43am

gorgeousnightmarexo (100)

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i loved it. it was very well written.

July 8th, 2012 at 12:49pm

Lucy Anathema. (355)

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I lost my place in the story and had to start all over; but I think you'll be happy to know that I finished reading the entire story in a little over twenty-four hours, interruptions included! Your story is the only one I have read that has been over fifteen or twenty chapters, and I think you did a wonderful job of keeping your readers entertained and allured by the magic of the touring band and falling in and out of love. This is a fantastic story; thank you for sharing it with us.

I'm going to check out more of your writing now!

June 29th, 2012 at 07:42am

ZombieCreatures (100)

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Your story was amazing the ending is completely realistic and the ending you wrote is brilliant. Never stop writing please.

June 21st, 2012 at 05:39pm

ZombieCreatures (100)

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Your story was amazing the ending is completely realistic and the ending you wrote is brilliant. Never stop writing please.

June 21st, 2012 at 05:39pm

littleedeath (100)

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:( awhh I can't believe it's over.. I loved this story, it's one of the best ones I've ever read! The ending was really good and hella cutee! Keep writing xx.

June 21st, 2012 at 06:00am